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Old 11-25-2013, 08:56 AM   #20
CymbiCort
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how you gon' win when,
your styles a wreck, if your driven for success im bettin' you'l crash
fam, your punches are emptier then that pocket you keep checkin' for cash
Statement, not really effective tbh.
kids like 30 still rocking the clothes that your brother gave you
in this battle Phucks ruining your face, like the way ur mother made you
this was an ok bar.
thats a straight style.. from the looks of a broke lazy thug
wearing his im over 21 Bracelet posted infront of the all ages club
ehhh statementish....somewhat landed
your cheeks are chunky fam, grandma probably loves to grab them twice
we wake up w/ sand in our eyes, this fat fuck wakes up w/ bags of rice
Nice
to me R!can your past is history, re-running the old shit isnt me
this battle'l have you hiding quicker then that finger so mom didnt see
wasn't really feeling it. Perhaps I'm missing something here.
if this was for the dough, id win by landslide & let you keep the money
so you can buy some new J's, cause those look like Nik A's from when he was 20
pretty decent here, keepin the jab consistency going.
pay for a haircut fam, you should really let the barber have'a whack
but if i catch you Hangin Over Ear, i'l have no choice but to have you Capped
ehhhh.
my punches will weather your body, enough the arm might bolt ya
you be shine'n hard i bet, w/ Grease on ur forehead that could ft. John Travoltta
This one was funny. A bit awkward but humorous, definitely.
these fist are fast they Speed,Stick... but isnt your degree the same one?
R!can's been in the Pit of his career, atleast we know were he got the name came from
Another humorous jab, nothing crazy.
make'n guap for scripture, im at the club why'lin poppin' liquor
he's outside the club pissed off cause his only ride there was his pops & sister
weak closer.

Vs.

Listen,
Fat punk A diet is not a option the fridge reads proceed w/ cation,
I See no family pictures of you hanging so that clearly means that this faggot is adopted.
It really doesn't though. Too statementish.
Nobody Hangs wit u pussy watch how Im Smashing this bear
Cuz in 10 seconds thats the same wooden chair imma remove from Under ur legs while Ur gasping for air.
Another statement.
U gayer than a fruit skittle. Faker than a fitness coach cuz this Dude little,
FatAss "posing like that for a pic"is the closes you'll ever be to holding two pistols.
Good .
U gave up on Lifting nights where ur mouths been Shifted right,
Cuz You got enough drywall set up there to put a virgin thru any type of demolition site.
Good.
We all know u dont get laid so stop ya Violent moves,
The closes u been to pussy is cleaning that liter box stand u have sitting in the dining room.
Decent here.
U Lick ur fingers on Another Quickness youve officially became a Slaughter witness,
Cuz if u walked around shirtless there'd be enough rolls stored away to put Krispy Kreme outta business
Wasn't feeling this.
These personals are true im tired already so i continue to Bust em Worthwhile,
Cuz the hair on ur chin just matched up to like 20 different Muslim pedophiles.
Humorous line here, nothing spectacular
I give em a Foolish stare cuz people think this Dude is fair?
Son The patch on ur chin hasn't seen a razor since a virgin first starting shaving there pubic hair.
Wording was awkward at the end, good concept, landed somewhat
Poor faggot imma boil ur fatass wit such a Drastic temperature
Let me guess u went all out on buying the house but filled the living room up with cheap plastic furniture.
ehhh.
Listen Chubbs. i believe i know you Very well enough to actually scare u hell,
Cuz U look like the type of fat kid to jump into a tub full of hot fudge n Caramel.
Wasn't feeling it.



Overall, I had Phuck Yew taking it. Both had equally weak openers and closers. I felt Phuck had a better closer and more good/decent hits throughout with the John travolta,bags of rice, armpit, and nika bars, which had a bit more sting vs. ricans pistols, demolition, pussy, and krispy kreme. So MVGT Phuck Yew for more consistency, a few better punches, more creativity, and not to mention a better flow/structure.

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