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Fig · 11-20-2013, 11:32 PM

this was well written, it was just kinda boring. sry. what I found interesting though was how you centered the text, and how it actually helped with the comprehension. the structure also helped in that regard I suppose.

I guess I didnt enjoy the storytelling aspect of this. The ending was statementish.

11-20-2013, 11:32 PM	#2
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	this was well written, it was just kinda boring. sry. what I found interesting though was how you centered the text, and how it actually helped with the comprehension. the structure also helped in that regard I suppose. I guess I didnt enjoy the storytelling aspect of this. The ending was statementish. __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15