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Old 11-18-2013, 01:55 AM   #12
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Vulgar- Well, Shit! This was an unorthodox, and intriguing read. Very off-the-beaten-path type of execution imo, and very well placed language, whereas nothing sounded tired or overused. Great underlying story, even though I believe the epilogue could have been worked in a little less obviously. That part kinda urked me. Besides that, awesome piece.

Mr. J- This was an inexplicable explosion of emotion I've never seen from you. This was very well written and much more fleshed out story-wise than what I thought you'd be decidedly capable of. I thought this echoed the topic spot-on and deserves a bigger backstory if it ever become an OM piece.


Overall both were great, but I was feeling Mr. J's more. MVGT Mr.J. Great job guys.
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