[Mr. J]

This was a pretty nice piece, I felt like you had more to it
but I may have just mistaken my quick reading for seeing the whole thing
I did notice that you edited it as well, this was pretty smooth though
a little swag to it, the flow was on point, reminds me of how I used to write
I hardly see you drop anymore but I do remember when you used to write consistently
very nice work regardless, you always tend to have a grasp of what you are trying to accomplish
I enjoyed the blowfish line as well as the smoking crack and gun's loaded part
a step out of what it turned out to be but felt like it wasn't a loose end, nice work