11-14-2013, 08:47 AM
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#16
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Ad mini tator
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 10,025
Battle Record: 26-54
Champed
- Lime Green Poetry Association
- Black August
- 1-2 Punch League
Rep Power: 85899403
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Split Eight
you NEED stronger multis, mechanics, schemes...
Your style is often described as "poetic". This is true. However, the subliminal meaning behind this is that your style cannot be described as 'topical'. Oftentimes you rhyme a single syllable or heavily justify your rhymes with slants.... this is bad practice
quite frankly, you are a better writer than me. that is why you champed the RSTL or whatever it was called, and I did not.
however, us Netcees voters are obsessed with the idea of stylistic flair. If you cannot
a) give your verse an authorial voice
b) rhyme (heavily, and perfectly,for multiple syllables)
c) give your verse a unique and distinct take on the topic
Then you won't champ the league.
SRS.
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Thank you good sir. Appreciate the honesty.
Same with you @ Certain
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