This was a good battle, breathless I thought you brought a unique style again man. The format was original and it still held a solid flow with multies scattered nicely. Wasn't really sure how the crossing streets landing tied in tho other than maybe a new course in life maybe?
Mw also a unique verse an metaphorically it was strong but literally I thought it was even better because of the humor aspect lol very smooth and well thought out piece with strong multies through out.
I gotta vote for Mike here for a bit more fluid verse and stronger in the metaphor department. Good battle guys
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