Tough
On one hand mike setvthe scene and imagery very nicely. While still
Maintaining a story that progressed well. Language was bumpy here and
There..could of used more range with your wording..but thats just me.
On the other hand adonis set the mood with raw emotion and a great
Poetic tone. Imagery wasnt far behind and his story held its own aswell.
Dope concept tbh..great creativity shown there. .always dig your angles.
Overall.
I got adonis...thought bringing out emotion makes sense...red..rage...its emotion
Great concept and angle....mike dropped fire but Adonis burned it down.
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