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Old 10-27-2013, 07:30 PM   #2
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Dude this was really heavy. Idk how factual or autobiographical this verse was but I hurt for you bro. Trust me Ive gone through the sort of place you described. You are in control and you are not a self fulfilling prophecy.

I liked the rhymes and besides a few spelling errors you did a fantastic job of narrating addiction and the hopelessness it brings along. I hope you learn to work through it and become whole again is all i can tell you.

Thanks man.



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