Honestly I thought this was a dope drop fig. When I read your verse I saw that we kinda have a similar style of writing but am I the only one seeing that? Idk lol. But I loved the content of this shit almost seemed introspective to me and made it feel real. Also I think it was an easy read with a nice flow and I have no problem with the vocab because to me it felt like alliteration being used throughout. Keep postin man
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