Vote - Clutter
Adonis, there were so many spots where a simple switching of word order would've improved not only the multies, but the cadence as well, expressed syllables out of place and such, storywise though it was really nice, actually captivating in the tale, but not so perfect in the lyricality
Clutter, dude, I imagined a middle aged black chick wearing clanky bangles reciting this defpoetry style in a dank room, shit was literally flawless lyrically but aside from that somewhat lacking, but shit was so clean though...
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