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Old 10-17-2013, 07:42 PM   #8
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I was feeling Kaeo's beginning...the beginning of the beginning
that felt very well written, the rest was smooth too
your style is pretty cool but then it started bouncing around
Vulgar your verse was pretty sick as well, you always drop something dope
this was short and sweet, your second, third, fourth line?...
I forget but I liked how you built up towards the ending
I enjoyed the lines that Whys quoted as well...dope collab drop fellas
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