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Old 10-15-2013, 11:14 AM   #3
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This was pretty nice the opener was pretty slick
I really enjoyed the second half. very well written
reminds me of me when I can't sleep the flow was keen
The little braggodocio vibe you have fits the message you convey
keep it up
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