I really like this minus the half slepped word throughout, that was kinda annoying. but i did dig the message, flow was a bit choppy towards the end at first read but smoothed out after i read it a couple times. really dug these lines
.... I'm stuck in a state of mind that theirs gotta b more
In this life... Its like what's the point of being confident for
.... Compliments, sure...Are nice to get but what's the price of it
My time is spent..& the cost for the life u live.. is typa big
think you should have put kinda big as apposed to typa big, doesnt really make sense but thats just minor shit bro. stay up
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