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Old 10-07-2013, 04:14 AM   #5
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Very believable. I related to Shawn almost immediately. I'd be surprised if this was fiction, honestly. The story just feels real to me. Excellent writing.
I can't poke any holes in this one. you worked the math throwback in flawlessly, too. nice drop JW.

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It Gave him a push needed to be a mathematical genius
In fact as a sophomore he wrote a collegian caliber thesis
Astounding with speeches, they say he had a golden tongue
They didn't know it came from hours in the mirror trying to hold himself up
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