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Old 10-04-2013, 06:19 PM   #2
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This was cool, had a different vibe due to the short line use
not poetic, just...more..expressional...if that's even a word
regardless I was digging the vibe, emotional for the most part
don't know why you would tag it how you did...dope though

I need you to comprehend the truth
Let me defend why too
Just tell me where are you?
I see the light
but I need to see you first
I can’t see you right
Conceived through blurs
There’s no belief through words
It’s too late for actions
past obsessions poured your blood
The craze & passion…
Absorbed your love
^^^dope
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