Cool battle.
Zenland held it down with a dope concept of what the picture had to offerin a fairly obvious way. Good structure, nothing really off the wall crazy as far as content was concerned. I mean pretty much just held a smooth flow with solid ideas that connected well to the piece. Went in the sort of direction I probably would have gone with this pic
Coupe
Thought you went a little more abstract and didn't exactly grasp the picture as full on. What you had were some pretty nice ideas that really.. to me, could have been about a lot of things other than this pic. Not to nitpick about not relating to your picture to much.. but also found some of you lines to be awkward in structure/format.. seemed a little off at times. Can't say I disliked your piece. Thought you did your thing, I just wasn't as fond of it as I was zenland. Enjoyed what you brought though sr. Work on relativity.
This was really close battle honestly, and my breakdowns may suck a little in this battle -sorry for that.
Bottom line though. I felt zenlands more "direct" display of ability to connect to his image hit harder this week than coupes abstract and perhaps more imaginative concepts did.
Vote -zen
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