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Old 09-17-2013, 06:17 PM   #20
Mr. J
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i've recycled time enough to know it's better to waste
i've devolved into a prototype. repetitive, fake
it was over the second they gave the devil a face.
my demons are dollars. endorsements, checking at Chase
spent on any substance that presents an escape.
i'm evil. stupid. selfish. all those negative traits
but i'm centered. almost perfect. true perfection awaits
passion in these parables, poetic for praise
^^^^

great minds must also share these parallels
nice work throughout the whole thing
I'm not quite sure if this was for one of the leagues
or on your own time, but the way it was weaved so perfectly deserves more observance
keep doing your thing
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