[Split]

opened.

It’s Mortal Combat in the Garden of Eden… hoe,
You try to tell these kids but they don’t hear you though,
I am totally brain washed now you can’t save me no,
I followed the white rabbit down through the dark whole
I already saw Saw 4 and you already knew that so,
Buffalo Bill me, or get a sense of horror, I love that shady show,
Vampire diary, not demons in their entirety,
But they’d rip someone’s head off when their blood counts low,


I thought those lines were coolest in the drop. You have a really decent flow and rhyme scheme, except your format kinda covers it up a bit

One thing that I realized was some of this felt forced cause of your accent

Unleash hell/ freestyle/ leave stale, all are pronounced differently when I read them

Some sections I didnt like. Second to last one.

But you are doing you, as Vulgar would say. Keep it up, stay active.