Scouting Report:
Odd formatting of verse.
Enjoys using adjective+noun double word multies
Standard rhyme scheme; end of line, sparing use of internal rhymes.
Rarely goes on long rhyme runs.
Dark/Macabre subject matter; "suicidal"
Enjoys brash imagery.
Longer length of lines.
Serrated Tyrant (I'm so fucking Deep)
My veins suffocate a navy color, they run down my wrist with a babbling sound
The azure blue reminds me of some deep ocean where I could haphazardly drown
I'm my own king and with my body I can do acts so senselessly cruel
Like erudite tongue laps around the razor marks; I'm in a sensational mood
This razor shines crimson white against the candles and lamp dimly lit
Next to this Puerto Rican whore, asleep and disappointed after I finished limp
I came on her face while masturbating with Spinach dip, the nasty explosion
Made me feel so alive that I had to killed my sperm too, that useless passive expulsion
There's no rush like extermination mixed with auto-erotic asphyxiation/
Because then I can't waste your time with text based on my phonic limitations/
My depression precedes another night of impotence and sex boots/
I love my imagery,
but fuck these crestfallen dolphins spouting purple rain from their blowholes of death juice/
Diamond bejeweled coma, I want to played Bejeweled with your devilish devil
I am the positive electron, ready to receive the serrated blade's negative metal
while I drift off pumping the volume to 11 on my sedative's level