[ZeeDee]

I know we had whatever differences in the league, but this was the pretty nice. Narration had a strong tone and intelligent flow to back it up. I liked the begging with the visual wording you chose and it made it appealing to keep reading and before I knew it, I was at the end..

Turbulence a testament that swirls on connecting as a merger to a nebula
It's blurring what's ahead of us...
Separate the vapor gate and pave the cosmic bed of dust
I cannot touch the hydrogen so wisely tread on, head of lust
Which trusts the comics nucleus, forever shooting spreading luck

that was particularly well worded