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Old 08-19-2013, 04:08 PM   #2
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there’s much debating to consider, as the loaded revolver spins
& though times are changing I’m not sure it can be resolved by spring
sins consult the wind, the air shares despair while the heat is on hold
I had all intention to go through with it but since then my feet have gone cold

^^Dope.

What's with suddenly hittin' up this section so often? Anyways...I liked alot of this, had some great imagery and your word usage was nice to say the least...actually it had a bit of everythin' that makes up a tight verse, good shit.

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