On phone sorry
Cake... definitely felt the imagery here. You took an interesting route. I could actually picture myself on a boardwalk tho lke jersey shore. Good story bro. Details are key imo and you executed
Pryde...Not realy feelsing writing about yourself for a story peice unless its some obviously ficticious out of body type peice. This was more flexing I guess?. Not bad content at all but I dont think it fits the requirments.
V/Cake
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