cool battle.
pancake - nice verse. very good story. ive been to coney island plenty times and have seen the street performers and ive always wondered what their life is like tbh. you described it pretty well here. was it a story in the classic sense? with an introduction, conflict, resolution. no. but it was the story of a man. the story of a human being and his thoughts and complexities. it told the story of his day and had good emotion. I also enjoyed the structure. good stuff. .
pryde - you seemed to to write a flex piece about yourself I assume. their was really no storytelling happening here at all tbh. it all felt very filler-ish. you went more swag and flow than anything else.
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