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Old 07-21-2013, 10:23 PM   #10
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Hai, you're not rusty as far as I can tell.

voila- nothing remains! inject a syringe in a vignette's coagulate veins.
^Original.

phrased a kid and his horse:
"breathe in the corpse- death's but an axiom away".
^not sure what you meant by 'phrased a kid' but I liked this line, calculating the measurements of death is a cool concept.

Colossus line was tough but this was my favorite of the piece:

"step forth and sink your omens in closeted light"

The poet's society has its perks.

keep dewing u
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