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Old 07-21-2013, 10:01 PM   #11
Vulgar
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lol yawl fellas had fun with this one.

Y'all softer than pillow foam, I soul flow sketch with the lead
extract beautiful memories from homeless wretches I've fed
black hole journey, honestly didn't stretch to my death
but time travelled - the colors added a edge to my breath
^Wasn't feeling the opening sequence much because it wreaked of braggatrollio, but this part was s!ck.

Black, you went the fluck in with this rhyme scheme:

a mutant, mutilant, gross - grotesque, illusory notes
used to indulge my psyche using beautiful quotes
wrote em down. computers broke when i tried viewing the post
^yeah

In light of the recent Albus Dumbledore failias, this was like a Bertie Botts Every Flavor Bean special edition: sorcerer's rendition of the braggadocio clinic. Both got your hits in. Nobody hit the canvas. Lyrics were had. Seats were filled.

Keeps were doing you's
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