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Natural 08-27-2013 02:04 AM

Alcohol Wizard (Key)
 
Yes they're innocent memories, but I still kill em endlessly
Liquid drizzlin drinking whiskey mesmorize the misery
Sickening addiction with thinking mixed in, its evil wizardry
Does it ever sink in? Emotional bickering mimicking weakness
Sleepless weekdays and weekends repeating itself in sequence
Feeding depression, depleting dopamine nueron firing frequence
Chemical changes, general genetics rearranging wildly
Some call it an alcoholic, science solves it as a disease evolving
It don't matter the label, its sooner or later fatal, societal apalling
Rock bottom gets lower every year, falling to a untitled teir
I find myself crawling calling fear, to release me and disappear
Satin sayin its stayin in attack formation to make an invasion here
In my body, my temple, its rotting my mental focus, its naughty
Corrosive to organs, dosing engorges the liver, poisoning problem
Living and dying by the choices, I wish they would've wasted a breathe
A curse, a firey blade, choose it but know its an expiring copy of death

Exis 08-27-2013 08:19 AM

Sickening addiction with thinking mixed in, its evil wizardry
Does it ever sink in? Emotional bickering mimicking weakness
Sleepless weekdays and weekends repeating itself in sequence

^^Liked it.

Chemical changes, general genetics rearranging wildly

^^Slick line.

I thought your flow was on and off, content also...sorta nice then not...I did like this however.What I quoted I really felt...and altho the rest was sorta iffy to me it wasn't bad by any means, all in all this was a good drop imo.

...Stay upwards man.

dead man 08-27-2013 06:09 PM

Ill drink to that!

CopyPat 08-29-2013 01:18 AM

i guess if its an actual key its not too bad. i wasn't really feeling this too much tho man, and i thought i would given the title. there was just nothing that really stood out here. kinda bland to me. no hate, just honest feed i just didn't see enough here

also when u said Satin did you mean Satan like the devil?? cause satin is material like cotton n shit haha

Natural 08-29-2013 01:47 AM

Yes, mispelling.
Word.

Mr. J 08-29-2013 02:49 PM

This was nice for a key the lyricism is here
but it needed more polish to be mind blowing
not taking away from it bit ypu know you could do better


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