Paging Mr. Herman
 

Obviously I'm all about status quo within a magic show
with a rooster in their face, just so them other faggots know
I'm backed with growth, making me obese, fat & gross
while the smoke clears & it's all mirrors to this elaborate joke
I need a nicotine patch to smoke, tucked in a backward roll
belly flop on passive flows, wave by when they gag & choke
White, Black, or youth in Asia when the vets play active roles
came through when the rations low, but kept my jacket close
while y'all complain enough to fill a wine cellar in my Mansion home...
my mind palace, Sherlock & Moriarty when I'm lacking foes
left & right brain back & forth, Aaliyah's flight after the aftershow
before the curtains close, & I get higher than a giraffes' nose
I'm in another world, a Phantom's home, cursed to practice hope
while I got my tool on...puppet master too farfetched to catch or know...
if it's reality or not...Socrates Philosophy, a scientific anomaly
psychology couldn't grasp the entirety of what's wrong with me
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Apologies, I base my ideas solely on Breaking Bad's properties
trying to find a balance on dramamine, with the ground mocking me
this is as easy as pi and this whole time I been Darren Aronofsky
the man behind the monarchy, with concubines and drama queens
probably overdoing it on 12's account way before the Mayan prophecies
I over saturated the game, became a well known name possibly
don't even talk to me, I'm a short fuse away from a kamikaze
these comics got me reflecting on the form they got from me...
Cash Rules Everything Around Me, CREAM and I apply it topically...
I dream demonic dreams and awake to a crucifix with the doc embalmin' me
reliving the robbery with a shot to the skull & Brad Pitt watching me

Hope you enjoy this link (from your title, I figured you would).

I will read your piece and possibly post a response... at a quick glance, it looks very good.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=en1i14U-pXY

Mr J you are truly underrated. Much more artful and honest in your inner feelings than me in fact. I can telI that some of this came from a dark place inside you and if any of that came from my behavior I am sorry.

Highly entertaining with a deft skill level. I think it's goes without saying I enjoyed this. Your multis were great which made this a smooth read. The psychology was cool but could be expounded upon. Connectivity between lines was dope. And I like the subtle tie in to the joker.

Overall entertaining piece. I think you should enter a topical league or tourney.

Fav Line;

I'm backed with growth, making me obese, fat & gross
while the smoke clears & it's all mirrors to this elaborate joke

I'm feeling myself again

lol at feeling urself again

i liked this j. had a fast paced rhythm to it. flowed effortlessly for the most part. you didn't really say anything too crazy but it was just solid. wish it was a little longer but yeah other than that a couple good references, it was a pretty good little drop

Yeaaaa it could be

This was cool, you flowed very nicely, thought you stayed on the same rhyme for awhile though but yea I enjoyed reading this. Don't think I've read anything from you but I liked your style.