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Old 07-30-2018, 07:37 AM   #1
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The Summer Classic ‘18
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Destroyer @For Battling

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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday,
    August 2nd, 2018 @ 11:59 PM PST.
  • Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 31st, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
  • Voting ends Saturday, August 4th, 11:59 PM PST.
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Line Limit:
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  • Max. = 16 lines
  • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

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Old 07-30-2018, 07:39 AM   #2
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Lol. I’ll agree to 12 lines about your hideous deformed lip
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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths
You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye
Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly
ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it
me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat
& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad
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Old 08-02-2018, 10:41 PM   #5
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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did
Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse
Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic
Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season
You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!
Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’

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Old 08-03-2018, 07:27 PM   #6
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Oh wow. There was some serious nastiness in this. I'll edit it a vote in when I have fully digested this exquisite meal of deliciousness
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Des - baby Ruth’s was cool // 2nd of beyond nay for me // fused properly lol good // one reaching and shot down was niiiice, mean // bags concept over done. Liked that you used the word beat // palates could’ve been better with a better tie in to palates...



For B. - wife’s dead fetus was harshhhhhh. Loved it // lol @ burst. Annabelle was good // dummy talk dope concept needed better set up // don’t know if I fully get the MMLP2. Not feeling even if I get it // bingo night was good for stick concepts // banging cans on floor I don’t think grocery stores honor that.



At first I had it clearly for Des but now need to re-evaluate and do it on points. Yes I got Des here. Good battle.
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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did

Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse


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Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly

me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat


Vote: For Battling... this was actually really close and the lotb was the fetus shit to me which is what pushed For Battling over the edge to the win. Wording really fucked up a lot of y'all verses seemed like you were more focused on just the ending punch in some of these lines. Like i said though close battle and For battling had my favorite bar of the battle to break the two punch tie that I had y'all in
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Old 08-05-2018, 12:39 PM   #9
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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths

Not really feeling the opener here...

You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye

Lol, funny jab here

Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly

Another funny jab..I like this one

ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it

ODing on the LIP bars, I didn't like this one to much here tho

me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat

This was good hit here and worded just right on the execution

& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad

Closer was decent, nothing to hard hitting on the opponent imo

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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did

Wow, direct personal sting on the opener

Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse

Lol, I had some Annabelle concepts I wanted to use, this was executed nice I must say tho.

Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic

Fiya!

Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season

Lol this was decent far as a jab go, personally funny here tho

You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!

Bingo lines kinda played, lmao but that rattle as a gunbar shit/lingo setup was funny as hell I cant lie

Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’

Decent closer, I don't to much think Can lines are hard hitters, but overall the line is decent at best.

Overall this was nice battle here, Des had a cool verse, but I feel like he was ODing on the LIP jokes a little to much where Zelph was all around in his verse. Des had 2 lines in his verse far as quotes go. Zelph had three & a half line far as quotes go with less misses. Props to both, but I got Zelph on this one.


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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths
huh? not getting the humour here, maybe im missing something... but nah
You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye
hmmm, kinda funny, this was okay
Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused
haha cool, this hit
ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it
okay
me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat
the whole bag over head idea is pretty overdone, chuckle worthy tho
& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad
lol cool wp, good finish

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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did
ohh shit, good hit & a tad better then the bar Des used
Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse
niice, cool concept & attack line
Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic
another dummy bar? anyways this is a cool flip on the ventriloquist idea, worded well
Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season
dece personal hit
You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!
damn, this is dope... good creativity here
Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’
it's funny you tell me I used too many gay punches when you have pretty
much an entire verse of gun bar lol... that aside, I dig this.. concept is dope, good finish


Good battle here, Des you had a couple good personal hits and a mixture of pretty/dece & okay lines.. FB nice verse, opener hit hard and some dope attack lines & concepts throughout..

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I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths
lol coo
You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye
nice
Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly
nah
ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it
dope
me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat
ok
& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad
no

3 gd punches
1 jab
2 misses
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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did
harsh. kind of a rebuttal tho
Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse
cool
Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic
2 dummy tie ins in a row? no
Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season
weak
You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!
no, reaching for a concept
Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’
ok

2 gd punches
1 jab
3 misses


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I wrote this vote four times an it's been lost four times. Z my man, if you wanna hear why message me bro. I had des here. In short because he took a personal angle the whole way through an nullified to a degree my fav bar by zelph (opener). Although zelph probs dropped best he has n there was alot of fire...Sadly you both had one miss an it came down to z using a few generics in there an destroyer making everything personal that edged it. My fav battle this round by far. Z if you wanna break down pm me bro loved this shit both deserve credit.

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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths

(Hmmm I didn’t care for this one. I like that you went for the flip on Zelph’s “I thought I told you” but the punch just wasn’t there”

You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye

(Lol this is funny. Pretty good)

Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly

(The archives part was a good personal angle. The second line was pretty good. Good prebuttal and the punch was okay. Overall good line)

ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it

(Hmmm this is not bad. You coulda set this up a better so we know exactly what ‘reaching and getting shot down for it’ is referring to. This was solid but coulda been dope with a better setup/tie in)

me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat

(Ehhh, the bags flip doesn’t feel fresh and the flip was pretty simple. Not bad though.

& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad

(Damn I wanted to like this one. The wp itself is slick but it def doesn’t fit in the punch both ways imo. Coulda def been fire with better execution)



I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did

(This would have been a bit better if Des didn’t anticipate it. It was okay)


Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse

(Yezzir. This is dope and creative)

Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic

(Dang you def shoulda split this and your last punch up. This coulda been fire as well but two dummy punches back to back take away from it even though dumb dumb punches aren’t even that common. The concept was still nice though and execution/wording as well. Overall pretty good)

Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season

(This is a good personal. Woulda liked to see a punch at the end or something to make it a tad more impactful. Not bad though)

You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!

(Lmao nigga got that tommy pickles tucked. This is a dope punch. I like the personal angle in the set up. The bingo night punch is dope and it tied into the set up well)

Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’

(This some hood shit lmao. The reference is funny af to me. Punch was nice. You flipped a pretty long phrase pretty flawlessly here which is impressive. Really good closer)


Man this is a good battle. A grudge match for sure.

Des had a nice verse. It read better each read imo. Des has some subtleties in his pen that I enjoyed. Also every punch had a personal touch to it. The amount of kip bars might have made some of your latter punches come off less impactful but you still showed a lot of creativity.

Zelph went off and was punching back to back. Des definitely had the better personals but you was tryna punch that niggas head off. A lot of heavy punches combined with gout wording and flow. Your verse was also very consistent with no misses imo.

This battle got closer and closer with each read but I thin Zelph had a few less misses and also had the heavier haymakers. I got zelph taking this one.

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I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths

sheesh

You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye

Ehhhhhh nah

Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly

coo you could've worded it better though

ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it

fireee

me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat

seen too many similar lines used against bags tbh but it was a cool personal

& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad

the set up made me think it was about to bang but that last bit was weird

vs

I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did

cot dam

Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse

Don't get it I don't fux with gay "horror" movies

Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic

feels used but good wording

Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season

I might be missing the reference for the punch but I don't see a connection to MMLP2? That had a ton of potential but yeah don't see any connection.

You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!

cool

Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’

was gonna say there's too many cans bars but the half off flip made it sting

pretty much exactly even for me. zelphs opener was his best and a good deflection on personals vs him. very knucklehead of you.

I think Destro had LOTB with the cop shit though it was slick as fuck and a bit more creative.

v/ des but can see it going either way. surprised by zelph i never really peeped you before just saw you get caught biting in the past so never pay your battles any mind lol
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I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths
st8, prolly giving more cred cause of the Goonies reference
You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye
cool line
Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly
solid
ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it
ehhhh decent cop flip
me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat
st8 because the ending was lackluster
& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad
ehhh OD'd on lip punches


I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did
jesus
Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse
dope
Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic
st8
Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season
st8
You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!
fuck with it
Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’
umm ,had to re-read it but i like it

I got FB here, his first 2 bars was dope with some decent one spread out, Des dropped good too but I OD'ed on lip jokes by the end. Good battle fellas
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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths
- just saw a goonies punch that was better, still decent.
You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye
-i love beyond jokes so yes
Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly
-predictions not as impressive after some ive seen lately plus this one was an easy call. Pluz Z's line that talked about the miscarraige was pretty rough lol
ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it
-i like
me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat
-na I can't get behind any Bags references after writing for him for a week.
& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad
-funny I like how it was pretty unexpected.
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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did
-yes
Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse
-ok
Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic
-little predictable but its like a backwards punch to me so that is why. You would have two similes I know.
Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season
- flow at the end I felt like I hit a speed bump, I can't nod this concept doesn't make up for it.
You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!
-yes
Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin'
-there it is. I know there's like an elitist movement on gunbars but keep doing them.
This shit close as all hell, to be expected. The shit feels really personal but i dont think Des capitalized on the bad blood to the same extent. Z read like he was angry, proving a point. Des read more like an antagonized bystander who had a piece to say, more jokes than anything. I would have liked to see a very aggressive Des take out the evil mod Zelph, but that didn't happen here imo. Still very close both guts deserve credit

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Zelph, aka, for battling, aka the creature we can’t wait to shoot
I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU to go chain yourself somewhere little fat kids can feed you baby ruths

lmaooo

You fucking cryptid... I legit hope u choke & die.
dude’s the second coming of Beyond w/one open lip instead of one open eye

oh snap the prophecy is fulfilled

Just stop it, Z.... in archives for days to get ammo for a smooth robbery
I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly

yikes

ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it

clean

me love ghost? nah. but every time u knock on a door, it’s trick or it’s treat
ur the one who needs bags - over ur face to stop scaring kids on your beat

lol

& now it’s sad. i feel almost sorry for my nouns & jabs
cuz normally my lips are sealed... but in this case, palates bad

ok


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I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did

this was tough, he telegraphed it but still

Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse

fire

Tell this fuckboy ive had it. He’ll look dumb af wen I pull up w/ static
Ventriloquist; these hands will make a dummy talk outta nowhere like its magic

look like u tried to work this into ur last bar an couldn't so we got this extra shit....was eh

Des wack in the 1-2, Ur trash lines has us cheesin..we call u wack for a reason
U can ask MMLP2.. he’s proof u haven’t dropped anything good the whole season

nah

You used “rattle” as a gunbar? This old man cnt seem to get the lingo right
I’ll paint the board red, this stick leavin’ rounds in a square.. it’s bingo night!

played

Look at the tools that I’m poppin. Proned out, aimin a scope at ya noggin’
Cheap shots, I’m bangin cans on the floor to take half off like I’m grocery shoppin’

super played
if zelph would've kept the steam going after them first two bars he would've fucked des up but after them two bars the verse took a shit for me i got des w more consistency


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I guess miscarriage lines??? bro. I have a kid who’s face & mouth tissue fused properly
ur not cut out for this. those bars just ain’t enough to not clown ur lips
ironic ur the cop but u will be the one reaching and getting shot down for it

vs

I cnt believe this shit. Des stays talkin bout my scar like he’s one to speak on it
Wel im jus glad I was able to develop more facial features than his wifes dead fetus did
Put this man in a hearse. U shoulda seen the way he ran from the burst
Or ill let a dummy go off in his crib & kill his whole family like the Annabelle curse

This battle was pretty dope tbh. The lines I quoted above from both were fuckin fire. that irony cop line was flames but that annabelle dummy shit was LOTB imo. Thats what kinda edged it here being so close.

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