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Old 05-07-2018, 08:57 PM   #1
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Old 05-07-2018, 08:59 PM   #2
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Guys I just bought me a super plush pillow top king mattress

I’m in heaven bros
Dude is u bluffin? oldd head braggin 'bout comfort is truly becoming
Be honest, the best 'Full-bed Pickup' u felt snug in safely fit 21 of ya Cousins
I'm TOO focused; Murder him & i'll leave body of dude floatin..
Christians wuld call it Cynic while detectives tryna figure out my True Motive
Fatass DO that asian angle to death. Maaan it's fake as ya rep
U've got so many new chins Chinas One Child Law applies to the Space on ya Neck
Made a power move to run LO but it was reallly a front..
Decrepit ol fuck. U damn well know Cred hadda Double-in for that Publicity Stunt
Ur Gunbars kinda odd. Spic aint neva let offf that fire, gawd
Only time u have Backup & the 'Pumpout for the Block' is if a Sewer Line is Clogged
I mean alll ya bullshit arms u talk cant stand to this savage steeze
I'm Thanos vs a Strange Clone. a Power of a Real Gem'll bring u Back To Reality
Retire bro; u been struggling w/ wording & my guy it shows
Hang it uppp. 2 decades in && style's now an awkward fit like ur High School Clothes
FACT: This Cuban's Connection to Yay's a topic of heavy debate
Last time Nika came across 'Great White' was describin a perilous Trek to the States
U date faggots who talk like faggots, the chemistry there is relevant..
He gets 'Periodic Tables for #2' w/ men who sound like they Inhaled that Element
But if u living the dream then eat, rock shows, yaknow? Keeep it Street
Ur music culd make 'Waves On Stages' by puttin crowds between light & Deep REM Sleep
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spell-check…
coulda helped with most ur DQs & by now mediocrity woulda had u on top of their polls
how u stop? cold turkey? rehab? or just woke up 1 day & was like yup got that editing problem under control!
u champ? c’mon bro! hold ya horses, this won’t be ya first major get-lucky tourney
ur style needs addressin... cuz it’s so corny it’s like u got ya concepts at the Kentucky Derby
ya verses are dull, boy... u another one of those depressed fucked-up in the head dudes
from infiltrating, infiltration to now infiltrate... yo we get it, u finally sneaked into a community that accepts u
u test who? killed u plenty datin back to the days of graffiti cuz I’ve sprayed longest
but realized guns in text must shoot paintballs... cuz I just finished a RIP mural with ur face on it
I stay honest, u proved regular season ain’t shit & made it hangin by a string
damn, u did ya thing BUT this is ya last second-shot... cuz I’m Lebron bankin on a win
see, I go from good to beast-mode in the playoffs as u secretly hope for some help
I’d tell u to pull the switch… but that requires signing off & logging-in as Satima to vote for yaself
all u hear’s a whistle after putting the muzzle, I grab the 9 & pull the trigger
u wont know what hit ya, ur girl thinks it’s a catcall… u think she’s surprising u for dinner
I’ma killer, quick to make u history while ya last girl thinks u’re so lame
but fuck ya ex… I’m from that generation where the chrome’ll crush ya heart without old flames
I got barc hating 1st rd loss, blue hating 2nd rd loss, plus Aero & muff whose won nothing
& now I’m supposed to lose to the guy who couldn’t defend his first championship win like he’s done something
Stop fronting. I’m the defending-champ teaching this little Asian dude honor
I feel like a true father cuz I’m going back to back like u tryin to see whose taller
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Dude is u bluffin? oldd head braggin 'bout comfort is truly becoming
Be honest, the best 'Full-bed Pickup' u felt snug in safely fit 21 of ya Cousins
(haha jookes)
I'm TOO focused; Murder him & i'll leave body of dude floatin..
Christians wuld call it Cynic while detectives tryna figure out my True Motive
(a little loose..this was nice tho)
Fatass DO that asian angle to death. Maaan it's fake as ya rep
U've got so many new chins Chinas One Child Law applies to the Space on ya Neck
(iffy on this one. a bit funny but also corny..leaning towards the latter)
Made a power move to run LO but it was reallly a front..
Decrepit ol fuck. U damn well know Cred hadda Double-in for that Publicity Stunt
(smooth)
Ur Gunbars kinda odd. Spic aint neva let offf that fire, gawd
Only time u have Backup & the 'Pumpout for the Block' is if a Sewer Line is Clogged
(fireee)
I mean alll ya bullshit arms u talk cant stand to this savage steeze
I'm Thanos vs a Strange Clone. a Power of a Real Gem'll bring u Back To Reality
(not my thing..i havent watch the movies)
Retire bro; u been struggling w/ wording & my guy it shows
Hang it uppp. 2 decades in && style's now an awkward fit like ur High School Clothes
(haha nice)
FACT: This Cuban's Connection to Yay's a topic of heavy debate
Last time Nika came across 'Great White' was describin a perilous Trek to the States
(i fw this haha)
U date faggots who talk like faggots, the chemistry there is relevant..
He gets 'Periodic Tables for #2' w/ men who sound like they Inhaled that Element
(helium? this is ok)
But if u living the dream then eat, rock shows, yaknow? Keeep it Street
Ur music culd make 'Waves On Stages' by puttin crowds between light & Deep REM Sleep
(ok)

6 quotes
2 misses
2 oks
. good showing here for sure..

coulda helped with most ur DQs & by now mediocrity woulda had u on top of their polls
how u stop? cold turkey? rehab? or just woke up 1 day & was like yup got that editing problem under control!
(lol pretty humorous open..it was just ok tho..i like how it was delivered though..borderline quote. leaning towards no)
u champ? c’mon bro! hold ya horses, this won’t be ya first major get-lucky tourney
ur style needs addressin... cuz it’s so corny it’s like u got ya concepts at the Kentucky Derby
(nahh..im not fw this)
ya verses are dull, boy... u another one of those depressed fucked-up in the head dudes
from infiltrating, infiltration to now infiltrate... yo we get it, u finally sneaked into a community that accepts u
(lol.. nice)
u test who? killed u plenty datin back to the days of graffiti cuz I’ve sprayed longest
but realized guns in text must shoot paintballs... cuz I just finished a RIP mural with ur face on it
(ha, clean)
I stay honest, u proved regular season ain’t shit & made it hangin by a string
damn, u did ya thing BUT this is ya last second-shot... cuz I’m Lebron bankin on a win
(.. ok)
see, I go from good to beast-mode in the playoffs as u secretly hope for some help
I’d tell u to pull the switch… but that requires signing off & logging-in as Satima to vote for yaself
(ahh shit lmao)
all u hear’s a whistle after putting the muzzle, I grab the 9 & pull the trigger
u wont know what hit ya, ur girl thinks it’s a catcall… u think she’s surprising u for dinner
(nice)
I’ma killer, quick to make u history while ya last girl thinks u’re so lame
but fuck ya ex… I’m from that generation where the chrome’ll crush ya heart without old flames
(hmm see what u did..but idk wasnt feeling as much as i thought i should)
I got barc hating 1st rd loss, blue hating 2nd rd loss, plus Aero & muff whose won nothing
& now I’m supposed to lose to the guy who couldn’t defend his first championship win like he’s done something
(oh shit. listen nigga...i never said shit to you or about you negatively gtfo my face..you want a go? pic battle? reg? 20 due in 2 hours fucknigga im not w/ this bullshit talking shit while u writing for OTHER niggas. especially on some sideways nonesense. anyays...this bar was good though)
Stop fronting. I’m the defending-champ teaching this little Asian dude honor
I feel like a true father cuz I’m going back to back like u tryin to see whose taller
(clean bar. more snf but shit i guess its an apt closer when u look at it)

6 quotes
2 oks
2 misses

really fucking close..unlike what aero predicted..i have it coming down to what i thought were the lotbs..and i want to jot inf down for that backup pump line..but yoo some of ill nikas personals were pretty stiff..and there were a few of em that were hard as opposed to cleverly written like infs..now sometimes i may prfer the creativity aspect but in this battle? im leaning towards the more visceral..and i got nika winning by a hair.

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21 cousins was lols, didn't like the Cynic/true motive thing or maybe i just didn't get it but I don't care to look it up. China seems like a diff take on an old joke to me tbh. I dunno. Pump out for the block was okay. Thanos was dope to me, so much brought into one line to tie it all together. High School Clothes was nice, pretty simple too which made it more direct I felt. You've done at lot better with these last four lines to me. Great White again was good, I liked the idea of periodic tables for two but not the line itself, weirdly. Maybe it's the wording. Closer was just okay to me.


Nik: Opener was okay, I like how you've gone at your opponent and not just for dope concepts right off the rip. Kentucky Derby again here isn't a great line but it's real direct to your opponent and you can sense you want this more. Community that accepts you was good. RIP mural again was good. Lebron line was swagging on him. I fuck with it. Saitama was another good direct personal line. Catcall was a more original Asian joke but I didn't feel it too much in truth. One of the more creative uses for sure though. First championship win was again another direct personal line, no unnecessary bullshit, just straight to the point and it worked. LOL at who's taller closer.


Nik got it. Just more direct, more personal with it, more consistent here. I fuck with Inf a lot but I felt like he just got out done heavily here. Maybe he was burnt out and Nik was fresher, I dunno, but I only see this going one way
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Dude is u bluffin? oldd head braggin 'bout comfort is truly becoming
Be honest, the best 'Full-bed Pickup' u felt snug in safely fit 21 of ya Cousins
lmao, good play on this concept. 9/10
I'm TOO focused; Murder him & i'll leave body of dude floatin..
Christians wuld call it Cynic while detectives tryna figure out my True Motive
cool nameplay & concept. nice bar 8/10
Fatass DO that asian angle to death. Maaan it's fake as ya rep
U've got so many new chins Chinas One Child Law applies to the Space on ya Neck
haha, fresh flip & funny fat punch... 8/10
Made a power move to run LO but it was reallly a front..
Decrepit ol fuck. U damn well know Cred hadda Double-in for that Publicity Stunt
okay/solid, personal hit and th meta was cool 7/10
Ur Gunbars kinda odd. Spic aint neva let offf that fire, gawd
Only time u have Backup & the 'Pumpout for the Block' is if a Sewer Line is Clogged
lol good concept, this was dope 8/10
I mean alll ya bullshit arms u talk cant stand to this savage steeze
I'm Thanos vs a Strange Clone. a Power of a Real Gem'll bring u Back To Reality
cool swag line, creative.. 7/10
Retire bro; u been struggling w/ wording & my guy it shows
Hang it uppp. 2 decades in && style's now an awkward fit like ur High School Clothes
haha this hit nicely to me, funny double personal 9/10
FACT: This Cuban's Connection to Yay's a topic of heavy debate
Last time Nika came across 'Great White' was describin a perilous Trek to the States
haha nice play ont his concept, thought this was fire 9/10
U date faggots who talk like faggots, the chemistry there is relevant..
He gets 'Periodic Tables for #2' w/ men who sound like they Inhaled that Element
hahaha, 2 ppl reservation/helium.. honestly I thought this was a fire concept and set-up real well.. 8/10
But if u living the dream then eat, rock shows, yaknow? Keeep it Street
Ur music culd make 'Waves On Stages' by puttin crowds between light & Deep REM Sleep
pretty cool/fresh concept, not sure I love it as a closer... dece 6/10

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spell-check…
coulda helped with most ur DQs & by now mediocrity woulda had u on top of their polls
how u stop? cold turkey? rehab? or just woke up 1 day & was like yup got that editing problem under control!
too run on for my taste, personal felt light, mehh bar to me 5/10
u champ? c’mon bro! hold ya horses, this won’t be ya first major get-lucky tourney
ur style needs addressin... cuz it’s so corny it’s like u got ya concepts at the Kentucky Derby
tie in in the setup was cool, decent concept 7/10
ya verses are dull, boy... u another one of those depressed fucked-up in the head dudes
from infiltrating, infiltration to now infiltrate... yo we get it, u finally sneaked into a community that accepts u
lol, pretty funny and worded well, punch kinda light but I dig it 8/10
u test who? killed u plenty datin back to the days of graffiti cuz I’ve sprayed longest
but realized guns in text must shoot paintballs... cuz I just finished a RIP mural with ur face on it
this is okay, pretty fresh as an attack line.. 7/10
I stay honest, u proved regular season ain’t shit & made it hangin by a string
damn, u did ya thing BUT this is ya last second-shot... cuz I’m Lebron bankin on a win
pretty good swag and current sports bar, creative but not a ton of sting.. still fw it it 8/10
see, I go from good to beast-mode in the playoffs as u secretly hope for some help
I’d tell u to pull the switch… but that requires signing off & logging-in as Satima to vote for yaself
pretty solid personal, setup well ths was nice & impactful 8/10
all u hear’s a whistle after putting the muzzle, I grab the 9 & pull the trigger
u wont know what hit ya, ur girl thinks it’s a catcall… u think she’s surprising u for dinner
cool abstract attack line & concept, 7/10 not crazy impactful
I’ma killer, quick to make u history while ya last girl thinks u’re so lame
but fuck ya ex… I’m from that generation where the chrome’ll crush ya heart without old flames
pretty dece for a follow-up attack line, coolish concept 7/10
I got barc hating 1st rd loss, blue hating 2nd rd loss, plus Aero & muff whose won nothing
& now I’m supposed to lose to the guy who couldn’t defend his first championship win like he’s done something
lol good swag and personal hit here, dig it 8/10
Stop fronting. I’m the defending-champ teaching this little Asian dude honor
I feel like a true father cuz I’m going back to back like u tryin to see whose taller
cool, works pretty good for a closer... nice finish 8/10


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Nika - 73




Dope finals here, props to both guys as both were pretty consistent throughout with fresh concepts and some solid personals / generic attack line etc.

I dunno, maybe its me and I'm diff then the norm nowadays, that's fine, Nika was very solid throughout with a bunch of pretty dece concepts which would beat most verses more than likely, he finished strong.... but Inf's really dope opener, double personal wording & style line, and the great white coke bar were my 3 favorite bars in this battle... To me, Inf's highers were higher to me and he had the consistency that let him stay with Nik in that regard here...tried to be as thorough as possible, props to both on impressive verses and seasons... I got Inf here

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Dude is u bluffin? oldd head braggin 'bout comfort is truly becoming
Be honest, the best 'Full-bed Pickup' u felt snug in safely fit 21 of ya Cousins

(lmao this is fire line and a dope punch.)

I'm TOO focused; Murder him & i'll leave body of dude floatin..
Christians wuld call it Cynic while detectives tryna figure out my True Motive

(That’s a clever name flip. Pretty good line))

Fatass DO that asian angle to death. Maaan it's fake as ya rep
U've got so many new chins Chinas One Child Law applies to the Space on ya Neck

(Lol my nigga did a flip about chin flips with a chin flip. This was pretty funny as well)

Made a power move to run LO but it was reallly a front..
Decrepit ol fuck. U damn well know Cred hadda Double-in for that Publicity Stunt

(I didn’t catch this bar. I personally think the best personals are set up in a way that anyone hearing it can catch it. I think if you don’t you run the risk of the audience not catching it and that’s what happened with me lol)

Ur Gunbars kinda odd. Spic aint neva let offf that fire, gawd
Only time u have Backup & the 'Pumpout for the Block' is if a Sewer Line is Clogged

(Lol inf being real loyal to the jokes. I think it’s a slight stretch in that “back up and pump out for the block” would be an awkward to describe both scenarios in the entendres. I thought it was pretty slick and pretty funny though)

I mean alll ya bullshit arms u talk cant stand to this savage steeze
I'm Thanos vs a Strange Clone. a Power of a Real Gem'll bring u Back To Reality

(This is pretty good. The punch isn’t that harsh but that’s a long phrase that you flipped flawlessly. Flexed your pen on that one)

Retire bro; u been struggling w/ wording & my guy it shows
Hang it uppp. 2 decades in && style's now an awkward fit like ur High School Clothes

(Another good line. That entire second line tied into the ‘high school clothes part’ and the first line set it up well)

FACT: This Cuban's Connection to Yay's a topic of heavy debate
Last time Nika came across 'Great White' was describin a perilous Trek to the States

(Creative. Good bar and it was funny)

U date faggots who talk like faggots, the chemistry there is relevant..
He gets 'Periodic Tables for #2' w/ men who sound like they Inhaled that Element

(This was too ambitious - I think you tried to do to much with this bar. You had to add in ‘number’ so that we knew you was talking about helium but that messed up the ‘table for 2’ meaning. Also ‘periodic’ seems slightly forced in. It wasn’t a bad miss but not nearly as crisp as some of the other material)

But if u living the dream then eat, rock shows, yaknow? Keeep it Street
Ur music culd make 'Waves On Stages' by puttin crowds between light & Deep REM Sleep

(Cool closer. The punch itself wasn’t crazy but i thought ‘waves on stage’/REM flip was pretty clever but it might be too obscure. Dream tie in made it a bit better too.)



coulda helped with most ur DQs & by now mediocrity woulda had u on top of their polls
how u stop? cold turkey? rehab? or just woke up 1 day & was like yup got that editing problem under control!

(Took awhile to get to the punch but I thought it was pretty funny)

u champ? c’mon bro! hold ya horses, this won’t be ya first major get-lucky tourney
ur style needs addressin... cuz it’s so corny it’s like u got ya concepts at the Kentucky Derby

(The set up made this bar. The punch itself was just okay but it had a lot of tie ins in the set up that made it cool)

ya verses are dull, boy... u another one of those depressed fucked-up in the head dudes
from infiltrating, infiltration to now infiltrate... yo we get it, u finally sneaked into a community that accepts u

(Solid personal)

u test who? killed u plenty datin back to the days of graffiti cuz I’ve sprayed longest
but realized guns in text must shoot paintballs... cuz I just finished a RIP mural with ur face on it

(Once again, a good set up elevated the bar. I thought he punch was just okay but you’re not wasting any words in your set ups and everything ties in to the punch. The punch it self wasn’t too crazy but I thought good bar as a whole)

I stay honest, u proved regular season ain’t shit & made it hangin by a string
damn, u did ya thing BUT this is ya last second-shot... cuz I’m Lebron bankin on a win

(This is nice. Clever angle and I like the current event tie in. Its nitpicky but my only issue is he didn’t really struggle reg season which kinda hurts the angle a bit)

see, I go from good to beast-mode in the playoffs as u secretly hope for some help
I’d tell u to pull the switch… but that requires signing off & logging-in as Satima to vote for yaself

(Good personal again. I like that you’re building on your previous bar to pick your opponent apart)

all u hear’s a whistle after putting the muzzle, I grab the 9 & pull the trigger
u wont know what hit ya, ur girl thinks it’s a catcall… u think she’s surprising u for dinner

(Ahh I like the catcall part. Wasn’t too crazy About the surprise for dinner part but I think you did a lot with this bar and seamlessly wove in 3 diff concepts together)

I’ma killer, quick to make u history while ya last girl thinks u’re so lame
but fuck ya ex… I’m from that generation where the chrome’ll crush ya heart without old flames

(Felt like a OG styling type bar. I like it. Well written bar too - not wasting a word/phrase from set up to punch)

I got barc hating 1st rd loss, blue hating 2nd rd loss, plus Aero & muff whose won nothing
& now I’m supposed to lose to the guy who couldn’t defend his first championship win like he’s done something

(Decent. This was a good angle but I thought it woulda landed harder if you punched at the end of the personal)

Stop fronting. I’m the defending-champ teaching this little Asian dude honor
I feel like a true father cuz I’m going back to back like u tryin to see whose taller

Cool way to close.



Very dope battle. This was stellar writing from both guys and I definitely thought this was finals material.

Both guys played to there strengths. Inf did what inf does which is show of his wit and a crisp pen. Multilayed writing with nice entendres and slick tie ins. I thought the adddd humor was a great touch as well.

Surprisingly, I think Nik matched Inf’s pen in this one. My guy wasn’t wasting a syllable in it and he had complex tie ins as well. Plus he does what he does crafting good angles and making good personals.

I thought both guys brought a lot to the table. No real misses from either guy - battle was neck and neck. I think the deciding factor was Inf’s punches hit slightly harder. Nik had a few well crafted lines where the punch lagged slightly behind the impact of Inf’s punches.

Mvgt Inf

Classic battle fellas
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muff the breakdown biter
stop using my methods, bra

decent battle here
underwhelming for the finals but meh, the standouts were cool
i got..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Infiltrate View Post
Dude is u bluffin? oldd head braggin 'bout comfort is truly becoming
Be honest, the best 'Full-bed Pickup' u felt snug in safely fit 21 of ya Cousins
lol nice
I'm TOO focused; Murder him & i'll leave body of dude floatin..
Christians wuld call it Cynic while detectives tryna figure out my True Motive
nope
Fatass DO that asian angle to death. Maaan it's fake as ya rep
U've got so many new chins Chinas One Child Law applies to the Space on ya Neck
played but true
Made a power move to run LO but it was reallly a front..
Decrepit ol fuck. U damn well know Cred hadda Double-in for that Publicity Stunt
miss
Ur Gunbars kinda odd. Spic aint neva let offf that fire, gawd
Only time u have Backup & the 'Pumpout for the Block' is if a Sewer Line is Clogged
dope
I mean alll ya bullshit arms u talk cant stand to this savage steeze
I'm Thanos vs a Strange Clone. a Power of a Real Gem'll bring u Back To Reality
creative but light
Retire bro; u been struggling w/ wording & my guy it shows
Hang it uppp. 2 decades in && style's now an awkward fit like ur High School Clothes
LOL yep
FACT: This Cuban's Connection to Yay's a topic of heavy debate
Last time Nika came across 'Great White' was describin a perilous Trek to the States
lmaoo fire
U date faggots who talk like faggots, the chemistry there is relevant..
He gets 'Periodic Tables for #2' w/ men who sound like they Inhaled that Element
nah, miss
But if u living the dream then eat, rock shows, yaknow? Keeep it Street
Ur music culd make 'Waves On Stages' by puttin crowds between light & Deep REM Sleep
nope

4 gd punches
1 jab
5 misses
vs

Quote:
Originally Posted by ill nik-A View Post
spell-check…
coulda helped with most ur DQs & by now mediocrity woulda had u on top of their polls
how u stop? cold turkey? rehab? or just woke up 1 day & was like yup got that editing problem under control!
ok, decent
u champ? c’mon bro! hold ya horses, this won’t be ya first major get-lucky tourney
ur style needs addressin... cuz it’s so corny it’s like u got ya concepts at the Kentucky Derby
wording made this bar miss, cool concept tho
ya verses are dull, boy... u another one of those depressed fucked-up in the head dudes
from infiltrating, infiltration to now infiltrate... yo we get it, u finally sneaked into a community that accepts u
now the wording was slick but the concept sucked. ima give it a pass tho, it hit
u test who? killed u plenty datin back to the days of graffiti cuz I’ve sprayed longest
but realized guns in text must shoot paintballs... cuz I just finished a RIP mural with ur face on it
wtf no
I stay honest, u proved regular season ain’t shit & made it hangin by a string
damn, u did ya thing BUT this is ya last second-shot... cuz I’m Lebron bankin on a win
dope
see, I go from good to beast-mode in the playoffs as u secretly hope for some help
I’d tell u to pull the switch… but that requires signing off & logging-in as Satima to vote for yaself
damn, fire
all u hear’s a whistle after putting the muzzle, I grab the 9 & pull the trigger
u wont know what hit ya, ur girl thinks it’s a catcall… u think she’s surprising u for dinner
nahh
I’ma killer, quick to make u history while ya last girl thinks u’re so lame
but fuck ya ex… I’m from that generation where the chrome’ll crush ya heart without old flames
whack
I got barc hating 1st rd loss, blue hating 2nd rd loss, plus Aero & muff whose won nothing
& now I’m supposed to lose to the guy who couldn’t defend his first championship win like he’s done something
bland
Stop fronting. I’m the defending-champ teaching this little Asian dude honor
I feel like a true father cuz I’m going back to back like u tryin to see whose taller
decent closer

2 gd punches
3 jabs
5 misses
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Infiltrate:
"Dude is u bluffin? oldd head braggin 'bout comfort is truly becoming
Be honest, the best 'Full-bed Pickup' u felt snug in safely fit 21 of ya Cousins"
(really like how you used the common sterotype of mexicans packing in and made it clever)

"Fatass DO that asian angle to death. Maaan it's fake as ya rep
U've got so many new chins Chinas One Child Law applies to the Space on ya Neck"
(like the chin concept here, almost painted an image of his big ass neck, regardless if it was or is or not, if that makes sense, just how I feel about it)

"Made a power move to run LO but it was reallly a front..
Decrepit ol fuck. U damn well know Cred hadda Double-in for that Publicity Stunt"
(Real nice personal with a good concept mix with it, nice)

"Ur Gunbars kinda odd. Spic aint neva let offf that fire, gawd
Only time u have Backup & the 'Pumpout for the Block' is if a Sewer Line is Clogged"
(Ouch)

"Retire bro; u been struggling w/ wording & my guy it shows
Hang it uppp. 2 decades in && style's now an awkward fit like ur High School Clothes"
(Not a huge hit here but to me thougt it was real funny and that made this a quote for me"

"But if u living the dream then eat, rock shows, yaknow? Keeep it Street
Ur music culd make 'Waves On Stages' by puttin crowds between light & Deep REM Sleep"
(good closer)


ill nik-A:
"ya verses are dull, boy... u another one of those depressed fucked-up in the head dudes
from infiltrating, infiltration to now infiltrate... yo we get it, u finally sneaked into a community that accepts u"
(This here made me literally laugh out loud, nice)

"u test who? killed u plenty datin back to the days of graffiti cuz I’ve sprayed longest
but realized guns in text must shoot paintballs... cuz I just finished a RIP mural with ur face on it
(Yo this was hot here I feel like you were real vivid and made this line pop for sure)

"all u hear’s a whistle after putting the muzzle, I grab the 9 & pull the trigger
u wont know what hit ya, ur girl thinks it’s a catcall… u think she’s surprising u for dinner"
(Real cool concept here I liked this and was pretty funny too)

"I got barc hating 1st rd loss, blue hating 2nd rd loss, plus Aero & muff whose won nothing
& now I’m supposed to lose to the guy who couldn’t defend his first championship win like he’s done something"
I liked this concept here, but still quoted it even though I feel like it was a little too wordy and was almost like a run on sentence, not in the sense of sentence structure, just how I feel about it, but still liked it though)


Overall: Wow this was a good final and read it back a few times, even with being different days and just came back to vote and read them again. Nice showing for sure guys and major props for making it to the end fellas. IDK, like I had this all typed up and almost decided not to post a vote the other night, because I guess dont want to make anyone mad, or to have them think I'm not qualified enough so maybe they will have some hate towards my vote. BUT ANYWAYS....nika to me was too wordy, idk in this battle is seems like Inf was just more crisp, cleaned up his bars and put some more effort into his verse than nika did. Feel nika went over board with a couple of lines and the back to back line wasnt feeling at all, and I liked Infs verse from start to finish, so with that being said MVGT - Infiltrate

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Dude is u bluffin? oldd head braggin 'bout comfort is truly becoming
Be honest, the best 'Full-bed Pickup' u felt snug in safely fit 21 of ya Cousins
-- lol, clownin
I'm TOO focused; Murder him & i'll leave body of dude floatin..
Christians wuld call it Cynic while detectives tryna figure out my True Motive
-- I mean, where's the punch? This may be going over my head.. but the only true punch is in the set up. My b if this is some shit that went over my head.
Fatass DO that asian angle to death. Maaan it's fake as ya rep
U've got so many new chins Chinas One Child Law applies to the Space on ya Neck
-- chins/China concept has been beatin to death
Made a power move to run LO but it was reallly a front..
Decrepit ol fuck. U damn well know Cred hadda Double-in for that Publicity Stunt
-- I'm puttin two and two together here... I'm pickin up on this personal. coo
Ur Gunbars kinda odd. Spic aint neva let offf that fire, gawd
Only time u have Backup & the 'Pumpout for the Block' is if a Sewer Line is Clogged
-- slick, nice
I mean alll ya bullshit arms u talk cant stand to this savage steeze
I'm Thanos vs a Strange Clone. a Power of a Real Gem'll bring u Back To Reality
-- nah
Retire bro; u been struggling w/ wording & my guy it shows
Hang it uppp. 2 decades in && style's now an awkward fit like ur High School Clothes
-- simple and played
FACT: This Cuban's Connection to Yay's a topic of heavy debate
Last time Nika came across 'Great White' was describin a perilous Trek to the States
-- aight
U date faggots who talk like faggots, the chemistry there is relevant..
He gets 'Periodic Tables for #2' w/ men who sound like they Inhaled that Element
-- not bad. I liked the concept but not the wording
But if u living the dream then eat, rock shows, yaknow? Keeep it Street
Ur music culd make 'Waves On Stages' by puttin crowds between light & Deep REM Sleep
-- nah


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coulda helped with most ur DQs & by now mediocrity woulda had u on top of their polls
how u stop? cold turkey? rehab? or just woke up 1 day & was like yup got that editing problem under control!
-- little jab... a lot of wording for a one syllable rhyme though
u champ? c’mon bro! hold ya horses, this won’t be ya first major get-lucky tourney
ur style needs addressin... cuz it’s so corny it’s like u got ya concepts at the Kentucky Derby
-- nah
ya verses are dull, boy... u another one of those depressed fucked-up in the head dudes
from infiltrating, infiltration to now infiltrate... yo we get it, u finally sneaked into a community that accepts u
-- got em
u test who? killed u plenty datin back to the days of graffiti cuz I’ve sprayed longest
but realized guns in text must shoot paintballs... cuz I just finished a RIP mural with ur face on it
-- aight
I stay honest, u proved regular season ain’t shit & made it hangin by a string
damn, u did ya thing BUT this is ya last second-shot... cuz I’m Lebron bankin on a win
-- aight
see, I go from good to beast-mode in the playoffs as u secretly hope for some help
I’d tell u to pull the switch… but that requires signing off & logging-in as Satima to vote for yaself
-- got em
all u hear’s a whistle after putting the muzzle, I grab the 9 & pull the trigger
u wont know what hit ya, ur girl thinks it’s a catcall… u think she’s surprising u for dinner
-- nah
I’ma killer, quick to make u history while ya last girl thinks u’re so lame
but fuck ya ex… I’m from that generation where the chrome’ll crush ya heart without old flames
-- nah
I got barc hating 1st rd loss, blue hating 2nd rd loss, plus Aero & muff whose won nothing
& now I’m supposed to lose to the guy who couldn’t defend his first championship win like he’s done something
-- smooth
Stop fronting. I’m the defending-champ teaching this little Asian dude honor
I feel like a true father cuz I’m going back to back like u tryin to see whose taller
-- coo



I like Infiltrate's opener, double in, and sewer line vs Nik's acceptance, vote for yaself, and closer. IDk, it's pretty neck and neck, could go either way... I think Infiltrate's quotables had a little more sting to them.


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