Incredible vs Exis - INCREDIBLE WINS

[Incredible]

14 lines
Due by tomorrow @ midnight

This is my check in

[Exis]

Ayo,

Another shit rapper to battle against
Bitch couldn't pick sides so she straddled the fence
My dick size slapped you of off the pickets
Told her to grip mine
Like it's cling time
Hangin' on for dear life
Wantin' shit to diminish
Let's finish this son,
Your lyrically fucked
Slag claim she's Incredible yet have never done won
I've elevated, yeah levelled on up
I'm on some pedistall ish
While you've descended dumb fuck
on some menstrual type thing
Wanna be the focus of attention on some centered typed things
I enter, you exit the thread
'Cause of a better ryhme scheme that Exis has left
Your rhymes ain't feel right,
Your lines are as anal as dildo strappin' bitches dykin' each other,
Just 'cause the shit seems tight
Doesn't make it likeable brotha.

[Exis]

So you call me out, set up line lengths & a time to drop by yet no show?

Mods close this shit...I'll take the win thanks.

[Incredible]

Originally Posted by Exis

So you call me out, set up line lengths & a time to drop by yet no show?

Mods close this shit...I'll take the win thanks.

Lol, Dude I just got home, I got 10 lines already ill whip up four more and post in like 30

[Incredible]

He didn't vote or comment in that tourney he was just beatin it to the exes
& After this u'll be like them w/ the L by ur name, they'll say ...."oh der go Lexis"
Foh bro... U been at it for years, I'm moving on up to my Prime
So when the shotty bangs ur body it includes the Opti...mus be Tranforming Time!
This isn't the Open Mic forum bitch we brawl here, Topic: Gory
He really a shaky felon...ur not even good at stickin to your Stories
Exis ain't respected or liked and most people think he a fag
Skills is what u lack, this battle? Trust you'll fall & no bodies got ur back
Burnt this lame to a crisp, he reaching for the sky, but just catch'n smoke
He couldn't have good delivery, even if he sent his verse in a envelop
In this fight boy its me, I'm the clear winner, your not even a challenger
Bust him in head so hard, u'll be in a circled daze like dates on a calendar
He don't know how to hang with the big dogs, they like "come on, damn it pass it!"
Couldn't come w/ these lines harder than me even if he wrote them on a granite tablet

[Exis]

Must be like 48 hours in a day where you @ lol...all good bro.

[Twodrop]

I didn't enjoy either verse. I thought Incredible did enough to get the 'w'... only because his verse had a couple attempts at actual punches.

Originally Posted by Exis

Ayo,
Your lines are as anal as dildo strappin' bitches dykin' each other,
Just 'cause the shit seems tight
Doesn't make it likeable brotha.

This line made me giggle.

however,

mvgt Incredible

[Exis]

How unsurprisin' especially after your pm's...

1 Zip.

[Jabari Black]

Exis had a cool verse it just wasn’t really a battle verse. It had more so an open mic type feel. In battles the focus is moreso on punches, wordplay, angles, schemes etc. as opposed to flow and brags. Typically most guys craft their punch first and then the set up after, but I could tell you wrote your verse straight through.

Like I said the verse was cool - I liked the flow of it but you already put yourself behind the 8ball. You also had a couple pausable bars so I had to deduct points from that too.

I though incredible had a pretty good verse esp with the short writing time. In the opener, I thought the beating to he exes was funny af but the punch wasn’t as good as the setup. You had a couple played lines with the “Optimus” flip and the “mail/delivery” flip so those bars missing.

The “Sticking to your stories” was LOTB. I thought it was a dope bar. That was a clever bar - good angle and good execution.

The trust fall and granite tablet bars were some just okay. Calendar day was a pretty clever idea. I thought it coulda been set up and executed better but still got it landing.

Overall Incredibles verse was just more direct and was geared towards his opponent. That plus a few slick lines helped him take the battle

Mvgt Incredible

[Flow]

Vote incredible for punching. Exis got that swag flow approach but as a battle there was no sting here. Id say increds stories line was his best probably. That envelope shit was so bad an played i nearly voted against you on principle though.

V Incred