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12-28-2015, 08:29 PM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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Look at that....a wild Pokemon
Staring at stained glass steady tryna get my mind right
keep them dimes like...the barber getting my lines right I shine bright but play hard to get cause Im hard to get riding down the lane bitches mad cause my offense hard to strip bored, thats how I often get when yall talking that awkward shit find me wherever karma is literally emitting my awesomeness dudes lack common sense to the point I introduce them to Thomas Paine hometown refs calling game, when you down its up to yall to hate I roll with mediocrity in my veins, write philosophies in flame waiting for God to peep the babble then try to topple me again but word....sup yall
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12-29-2015, 02:11 PM
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It flowed well. It came off as very stream of conscious, which is cool. But I've read wittier things from you.
Keep doing. Cimm. |
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12-31-2015, 03:30 PM
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Keep writing bro.. Seemed like a warm up.
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