First Song... Roasts, Opinions, Feedback?

[Lenox]

Originally Posted by Ajax

The commentary at the end came off pretty corny and unnecessary. You don’t need to tell a random listener to suck your dick for no reason.

The track itself was ok. Not bad, by any means. I think it could use some re-takes, because in a couple spots the flow slipped, but the flow in general was solid enough.. What was really missing was delivery — you didn’t sound amped enough. But, that will come with practice, and some of that is definitely a mixing issue... all in all, this was pretty cool. Definitely a good foundation.

thanks dude, also yea i didn’t know wtf to say at the end it kinda just came out rofl

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by Lenox

how u doin bags, also do u have a link to the NC discord bro? was looking to join

Lol pretty dece

I may have it in my inbox I'll check

[Lenox]

Originally Posted by Pakistani Hand Cannon

flows nice in my opinion - def got a lil sketchy in areas ("dunno how to act i just lie" & couple bars following it were off up until "dont rip track i move weight..." & then onwards its butter. - on the whole its straight, unorthodox, but im with that.

everthing else is just generic though - nothin overly whack - but nothin particularly nice either.

i wasnt mad at it.

i also still say steelo - fuck what year it is.

thx g, so yea for my first track i was only focused on flowing over it and not the content of what i was saying. thank u for listening means a lot

[Lenox]

Originally Posted by Ghost1

Lol pretty dece

I may have it in my inbox I'll check

no worries in it now, i just sent a message in there