07-04-2019, 04:37 AM | #1 |
The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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Quarter Past Midnight
Corruption pays, I follow, tuck my laces
Found where I could once complain.. But now this the life I live out I'm riding until my high gives out Haters that try need to sit down Cause I'm rolling with my piff loud Got em drooling like the pits mouth. See who got them hits nowwwww.... Haters find me unsettling. If they mad then fuck pleasantries Too much to cycle through... Heat & tandem but I'm the one pedalling. Vision quest while y'all sitting stressed Failed the eyesight & written test. Nothing to show for the ride along Backseat driver with the light aloft ID a sucker... Nice idea sucker.. I'll see ya suckers
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07-09-2019, 10:53 AM | #2 |
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this seems like it fits more in a cypher setting vs an open mic. It was too short and i didn't find most of it too hard hitting or prfound. the peddling line is good though. but son, a real roller does not make a sound lulz. decent stuff here.
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