07-11-2019, 12:12 PM | #1 |
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I stopped posting for a while. Didnt stop writing though.
This was yesterday. Much love... Melting pheonix. Felt is thinking. Spell it. Breathe it. Maybe we all get some rest when hell freezes? But the mind constantly moves.. Telekinesis Myyy, we're all getting used to a skeleton's freedom Monster colossal, lol they wanna block apollo Pop the bottles.. Light in skin, it lies within It's not just hollow Groovy fluid wings to beat- should see my flock of swallows Now the question is how foolish does foolish get? Plucking love me's subzero cool is bliss Ice-tide pool of webs that group in crystals Pond of ghosts.. On the float. You think you're on a boat.. Wanderglow.. You wanna go Praying to get a sail You already do. You're not in a maze. You're already through Trying to grow some wings you already grew Trying to find yourself but youre already you It's as natural as magick. What are they keeping in place with their cast of disaster? A planet of actors. Abracadabra Vanity is sweet..Treaty breech on planet Me-tv Trying to channel existence admist sabotage-witches with camoflauged interests Mirror-dream of echoes..like what's the meteor special Took the me from your schedule, guess it's all so easier to let go I pluck em with paint upon an easel of petals Words are swords and I teethe on the metals Chipping me. Liquid-heat hidden beat symphonies Gaze in the glitches. Days of infinite Ancient exquisite. Only battle? Thought Lonely astronaut who doesn't know what to do with space when he gets it Way of the mystik, tonguing blueprints to your labia's physics Safe of clit'iss. You got the password. Yeah sure, I'll be your angel to burn But it's grave concern when the tables have turned and halos emerge Holy? Blow me. Police are Not-sees Robots on leash.. Cop...ies Their whole has died. Polarized Polar eyes that won't ascend They try to climb the pole and slide bc their poles are ICE Never-looking on plethra Better reach for ya weapon, pussy Splashin' Tinker for the real inside rapid thinkers.. Here's my psychic applaud. Wanna write with a god to feel alive? They call me magick-fingers, I AM MASSAGE
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07-13-2019, 12:22 AM | #2 |
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this is really good. read it a few times already. lots of creative idiom flips and wordplays that worked with the concept as a whole. specifically the pop the bottes.. Light in skin and fluid wings and flock of swallow were interesting. pluck me's sub-zero and pluck'em with paint were also cool turn of phrase.
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very awesome read my man. Last edited by Scar; 07-13-2019 at 02:44 PM. |
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