Quarter Past Midnight

Mr. J · 07-04-2019, 04:37 AM

Corruption pays, I follow, tuck my laces
Found where I could once complain..
But now this the life I live out
I'm riding until my high gives out
Haters that try need to sit down
Cause I'm rolling with my piff loud
Got em drooling like the pits mouth.
See who got them hits nowwwww....
Haters find me unsettling.
If they mad then fuck pleasantries
Too much to cycle through...
Heat & tandem but I'm the one pedalling.
Vision quest while y'all sitting stressed
Failed the eyesight & written test.
Nothing to show for the ride along
Backseat driver with the light aloft
ID a sucker...
Nice idea sucker..
I'll see ya suckers

Scar · 07-09-2019, 10:53 AM

this seems like it fits more in a cypher setting vs an open mic. It was too short and i didn't find most of it too hard hitting or prfound. the peddling line is good though. but son, a real roller does not make a sound lulz. decent stuff here.

07-04-2019, 04:37 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,022 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Quarter Past Midnight Corruption pays, I follow, tuck my laces Found where I could once complain.. But now this the life I live out I'm riding until my high gives out Haters that try need to sit down Cause I'm rolling with my piff loud Got em drooling like the pits mouth. See who got them hits nowwwww.... Haters find me unsettling. If they mad then fuck pleasantries Too much to cycle through... Heat & tandem but I'm the one pedalling. Vision quest while y'all sitting stressed Failed the eyesight & written test. Nothing to show for the ride along Backseat driver with the light aloft ID a sucker... Nice idea sucker.. I'll see ya suckers __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

07-09-2019, 10:53 AM	#2
Scar Senior Member Join Date: May 2019 Posts: 530 Battle Record: 7-5 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5689705	this seems like it fits more in a cypher setting vs an open mic. It was too short and i didn't find most of it too hard hitting or prfound. the peddling line is good though. but son, a real roller does not make a sound lulz. decent stuff here.