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Old 08-07-2020, 01:23 PM   #61
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ether.. lol god.. I might key some more bars to this.. I was tired as fuck keyin this verse at 4 am in the morning (lol) last night and I passed out but I definitely wanted to finish it.. just never had the chance to..
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Old 08-07-2020, 01:56 PM   #62
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He's straight up donated money to your garbage site and you do him like this? Smh

Also trying to rhyme farm and songs? Smh



btw due date means literally nothing. This is an OM drop. you give others feedback and they give you feedback. Don't act like you get a W if he doesn't respond with a verse

I had no clue that was him who donated money to my forum and to prove my point, I even shouted that person out on a thread on #OCTF, respectably. As for our relationship tho.. dude, zuche talks hella shit about on this website and who would think he'd be the first guy to donate anything to my forum? lmfao.

At the end of the day, zuche deserved this.. #R.I.P
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Old 08-09-2020, 04:01 AM   #64
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sad shame that all my battle verses on NC are hall of fame material.. and I got robbed twice on two battles I won due to politics regarding certain admins and their friendships on NC and etc.. smh it would of been dope to see that go down, as im sure it could have liven things up a bit on NC for keeping it real.. lol :: hint :: I hate wasting my time keyin in verses that potentially change the course of creation itself..
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Old 08-09-2020, 04:25 AM   #66
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but god tho.. lmfaooo.. this verse is classic.
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quick keystyle..

I'll crush your skeleton to gelatin and wreck-through-your-frame//
then use your remains for offerings for devilish-games//
it's imperative, you'd understand you winning is strange// (..lol)
like same sex marriages exhibiting-aids//
yet how irrelevant it is for me to script on this page?//
when this cat is literally gay in frivolous-ways// (.. lol)
.. you not in my class, move out of my lane,
I couldn't depict whats worse.. you talking shit or your mysterious name// (..lol)
.. It's quite delirious, you'd have that displayed,
I guess you and "anonymous" have something in common.. beyond query and phrase//(..lol, as in, "genocide" aka white earl biting my name as, "anonamous"/his name/j query html scripts)
I'll empty a clip right into your face.. three-in-your-spine//
than shoot your brains on your dashboard and "read-your-mind"//
I'll knock your top off.. you not hard, stop pretending you gangsta//
I'll definitely shank ya.. you just a punk bitch internet-prankster// (.. lol)
.. two in the chamber, one in-your-spleen//
and fuck "username" like 3 failed attempts at the login-screen// (.. lol)
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quick keystyle.. quick 16..

I'll box your chin in.. you not winnin', I drop wisdom//
.. so ima feed him a verse and watch this plot thicken//(his name/plot, as in, "story"..)
you not listenin'.. don't give a fuck if you brolic,
get dropped after giving me knowledge like courses- in-college//(knowledge, as in.. "oral sex")
pay homage to the greatest, your forced punches wont budge me//
I'm more like neo in the matrix, cause each of your throws don't touch me//(.. lol)
son lucky we on net, cause offline.. he's all pet,
I had him reaching for his phone like he called in a bomb-threat//(.. lol)
he kept dialing in, "9-1-1".. I snatched the phone from his hand,
and showed him the plan, of what it took to be known as the man//
.. he froze in his stance, and didn't know whether to try posing again//
this was after I dropped plot on his head, that's how the story began//(lol.. his name/and plot.. as in, "story")
I first stood him on his feet.. soon after my jab,
he after my cash.. he know Cor straight after his ass// (.. lol)
I mastered the craft of rhyming like a science and math,
and ran plot off more boards, then assignments-in-class//
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Old 08-10-2020, 07:06 AM   #69
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lol.. ^^^^^
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lmfao.. ^^^ this nigga never responded back to this..
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lol ^^^^^ this nigga never responded back to this either.. LMFAO.. everyone dodging me on NC.. wow.. smh..
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fuck exis..
I'll punish this guy.. he'll crumble and die//
and mount exis (exit) to the ground, like a government sign//(lol.. his name/government sign)
.. best believe he'll never win, him beating me is a negative//
it's evident he's retarded..
you couldn't pronounce his name without a speech-impediment//(.. exis)
I'll teach this degenerate a lesson.. as I piece his head into segments//
cause either way he's getting fucked, regardless of his sexual-preference//
.. I'll batter this nigga exis in battle and trash his record//
and shatter his clavicle till' he baffles and chatters his death wish//
I'll handle this peasant and damage his essence//
.. and rip exis off his skin like damaged complexion// (exis.. excess/eczema)
I'm raw.. my lyrical skills are beyond his comprehension//
a verbal chemist, destroying labs with liquids tested over records//
saliva samples gathered and measured, when composing my writtens//
in the coldest conditions, been flowing with this sickness before exis existed//(.. his name/the word, "existed")
infectious linguistics'll wreck your existence//(.. his name/the word, "existence")
bullets travel to your body, too quick for the ballistic report to match up with forensics//
I'll torment exis till' he's pronounced schizophrenic//
till' he's institutionalized and subdued by anesthetics//
till' he can't move a muscle due to hallucinogenics//
injected by countless needles, and he pukes his intestines//
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you'll get wrecked from the jump and left with a lump//
I'm testing this chump.. looking like something I'd snack on for breakfast-or-lunch//
.. I'll punch you in the gut and make your intestines-combust//
and cut you into sections for an-adrenaline-rush//
.. I'm "dead-as-fuck", like having sex with dead infectious-sluts//
that I will shread you up into peices and "blend-your-nuts"//
who'd defend this punk? he's soft.. he never wanted to battle//
he threw in the flag quick.. like gang affiliates-in-seattle//(.. lol, gang members in d.c area who live near, "the white house")
Im ready for war and dressed in my camou..
throw a grenade if I have to, and watch the shrapnel stick to your skin-like-tattoos//
.. bullets'll hit you when I lift up my pistol//
.. leave you with so many holes, the air you breathe gon' make your body-whistle//
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Old 08-10-2020, 07:36 AM   #76
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Lol...Guess you want me to respond to this bullshit? Well not goin' to happen son, have better things to do with my time...get a life bitch.
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& This whole quick keystyle //////// shit...fuck off me faggot, you're pathetic.
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Exis and exit are the same?
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lol, "exis" means "exit" in middle eastern literature, but it was considered a dead language so it was abolished by officials. Freemasons commonly use this term but not all. William Shakespeare used the term frequently, in novels archived in the Freemasonry titled as, "Long Live The King", and else manuscripts but Gold dust (exis) don't know that tho, lol.. sshh.. Obviously, these novels are not open to the public but are only accessible through hierarchy in the Masonry so don't bother looking for them online, lol.

The term was created and revised to English literature by a palesmen (of the, dutch) during the 1400's and was considered to be a romance throughout the history of literature but was abolished from the common language due to on going debates throughout the Freemasonry concerning power and direction. Obviously, this knowledge cannot be "googled" or anything of that nature, per say but as said prior, only are accessible through the hierarchy of the Freemasonry. In essence, don't even bother wasting your time looking this information up, because you won't find anything on it, perhaps.
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