01-29-2014, 05:18 PM | #1 |
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Poetic (me & you)
You are my everything,
I don't want noone but you. I been thinkin bout you day & night, I don't want you to leave me. Everyday we fussing & cursing but I stick with you, Because I love you. When I look into your eyes, I see connection meant to be. These are the reasons why I love you, you are loyalty, you are faithful. you are Charming. suppose to be Poetic |
01-29-2014, 05:19 PM | #2 |
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I love you, too.
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01-29-2014, 09:03 PM | #3 |
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''you are loyalty,''
^ I liked this line. Dope shit.
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01-29-2014, 11:49 PM | #4 |
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thanks!
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02-01-2014, 09:00 AM | #5 |
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This is why I hate poetry.
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02-01-2014, 09:30 AM | #6 |
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^ nahh this was cool. A little simple yeah but poetry can be whatever, that's the cool shit about it. I was feeling the emotion in this.. for some people its hard to give in and put themselves out there in their own writing. I think writings the perfect place TO do that, one of the only places for me.. so I appreciate how deep you got with this. Nice.
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