02-08-2013, 01:25 PM | #1 |
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'Address Dope Boy Fresh'
another re-post from netcees
My sound's ridiculous, got it down to a synthesis Push that rock on the block, around town im crowned Sisyphus Hit the ground with a grip, on the prowl hittin licks take they clout if they flip; lay em out n make they house into crypts Im all about the click clack till I collect big stacks Checks get cashed exempt with tax to graft and protect kick backs In pitch black I hustle quick fast, my muscle gets that so there's never trouble on the double up for the cut or pinched bags I stop and fantasize when I plot to plan my grinds cops get handed bribes to stand in line like they wanna pantomime I dont drop nann in dimes with a hot frantic mind When I got grams to pies cramped inside of my pants grand design I let them cannons fly, a quick burst gets em sick hurt Done did dirt, grab a tricks purse n stomp em out till I kick curbs Let that whip work while the wrist stirs with a sifter my mixtures blister on the bubble up and comes to a tinctured simmer I re-up like an anagram with all the back and forth When I handle grams its ambulance crash'n course on path to court I've ran the dance with plants, coke, crack and horse all leaving tracks and sores, and fiends with long sleeves grabbin more Shit...believe I give em what they askin for. |
02-08-2013, 08:41 PM | #2 |
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*daps* that was crazy! the rhyme schemes was exceptional vocab was great but the whole verse had a gritty street feel, vivid as fuck, this shit extra my nigga!!! When I got grams to pies cramped inside of my pants grand design I let them cannons fly, a quick burst gets em sick hurt Done did dirt, grab a tricks purse n stomp em out till I kick curbs Let that whip work while the wrist stirs with a sifter CRACK!^^^
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02-08-2013, 10:04 PM | #3 |
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02-09-2013, 12:38 AM | #4 |
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lol split this aint the type of sht u like, I am aware of that....
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02-09-2013, 01:57 AM | #5 |
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yo don't play me like that homie
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02-09-2013, 08:13 PM | #6 |
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Very nice flow and nice multis but I wasn't seeing any real content here imo but maybe that's just me. But all in all I was diggin it man. Props
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02-16-2013, 09:40 AM | #7 |
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Seriously.
This needs more reads. This is one of the best examples of NATURAL flow i've read in a hot minute, Rawn. Fuck ya... was really refreshing - old school vibe, had me reflecting on some of the dopest battle writers in the day. I've seen the emphasis on flow have ups and downs throughout the years --- and while the emphasis is high these days for alot of battlers it seems, it doesn't read naturally to me as it did in the day. alot of dudes force words together, to make sure it rhymes, even if the sentence dont quite make sense. You didn't do that. I can say that this generation is more attentive to syllable counting than some other phases - which makes for a rhythmic read, which is dope -- and which you did as well -- but I just thought the flow was great. Strong flow - a cool steeze, gutta theme...some cool concepts sprinkled throughout too - really solid flex drop brotha, i like your swagger and look forward to peepin more of your shit. |
02-16-2013, 09:34 PM | #8 |
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Oh i remember reading this one on nc. Really sick flow on this. I thought it was dope as fuck then and sti ll think its dope as fuck now. Always a pleasure.reading ur work. I think ill drop some old stuff here too.
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