"The Emperor's New Gear."

namix · 02-05-2013, 04:10 AM

Dedicated to the “skill-to-shit talk” ratio gettin all kinds of fucked up.

"The Emperor’s New Gear"

the emperor’s rockin new gear! but what he rocks is not clear.
and after some reflection, the queer should of gotten a mirror

wonderin who?

THIS DROP IS FOR YOU! come get handled like my business.
some put stock in you; but you couldn’t keep my interest.
wanna hold our attention?! ya too shitty dude, sorry…
at best we'll be dye vested like a hippy groom party.

is this a flex about his clothes? is it a diss about his art?
either way, it isn’t very hard to see me shittin on his garb.
i be spittin out them bars…boy, they fly just like my venom;
he could battle me in skinny jeans, i’d still be tighter denim.

fuck the black shoes, black socks, & black pants the cat got;
see him beat to the ground…
….and leave a REAL profound impression in the blacktop!
even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop;
until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop.
got some bad clocks, he's ticked but not movin; i detect weakness;
so i'll rip his fuckin throat apart and sell his girl some neckpieces!

then wear his heart on MY sleeve; people, see we had love!
nothing has ever came between us except really bad blood!
wheelin in mud, when he’s found flat; its exceeding bad luck;
….who said changing attire was easy after bein jacked up?
help arrived, but the tow-truck man just stopped to diss him
cuz he cant pull off the lugz.. or yoga pants he rocks wit’em

don’t get me started on his taste, no topic deader than that
if I liked the distressed look…….. I’d rock his head as a hat.
but first i’ll make him face his fears; wit one look in the glass
once he soils his pants, im going to plant my foot in his ass
style-wise, cant iron out the problems, wrinkled too vicious;
so i'll put his blouse thru the wringer with this bitch still in it!

his impact aint lastin long, kids act like his rap’s the bomb
but that formalwear off quick as a drunk chick after prom
I can pull quotables out my ass.... he got nothing this fancy
he'd have to pull his only one-liner out the front of his panties

caught his name 'n let it go; what’s my reason to be skeptical?
if memory serves, I’ll remind him that his pieces are forgettable
i might blog about his spectacles, use my site to cite the truth,
make my tightest Loophole ever, describin how I tied his noose!

he coulda used my tutelage; he really needed supervision;
but didn’t need the cross-training to receive this crucifixion!
i discovered a cover-up, revealed it; now the mystery’s dead;
find the legend buried deep within one of our conspiracy threads.

randum · 02-05-2013, 11:35 AM

too ill, I'll feed this later today. props

Nigma · 02-05-2013, 11:57 AM

Crazy unique piece, wordplay and symbolism were off the chain. The rhyme scheme was pretty chill which is normally something that I'd criticize, but the content you packed within each lines did more then make up for it. Really enjoyed this

Camp Bell · 02-05-2013, 02:27 PM

HAHAH this was dumb hard, who was you going at tho?
lololol sheesh!

fuck the black shoes, black socks, & black pants the cat got;
see him beat to the ground…
….and leave a REAL profound impression in the blacktop!
even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop;
until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop.
got some bad clocks, he's ticked but not movin; i detect weakness;
so i'll rip his fuckin throat apart and sell his girl some neckpieces!

namix · 02-05-2013, 11:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

HAHAH this was dumb hard, who was you going at tho?
lololol sheesh!

fuck the black shoes, black socks, & black pants the cat got;
see him beat to the ground…
….and leave a REAL profound impression in the blacktop!
even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop;
until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop.
got some bad clocks, he's ticked but not movin; i detect weakness;
so i'll rip his fuckin throat apart and sell his girl some neckpieces!

lol, woof.

good lookin on the feedback fellas, appreciate it!

PancakeBrah · 02-05-2013, 11:56 PM

>open topic
>see stock/interest wordplay
>leave

zygote · 02-06-2013, 02:07 AM

Good focus keeping up the different types of clothing themed wordplay. You could do a series of these - wordplay only on different topics/themes.

02-06-2013, 03:16 AM

This was pretty dope

Flow was fluid, and u schemed it dope..
Content wise this was a nice showing in various areas; nice display of wordplay and punches corresponding with ur theme. If I had to say something negative it would be that some references seemed a little out of place..like I felt that they changed the tone halfway through...might b just me, and very minor...non the less. Enjoyable man.

namix · 02-07-2013, 11:28 AM

good lookin fellas, thanks for the feedback.

I'll swoop through the OM and return the favor today or tomorrow for those of you who've dropped.

namix · 02-16-2013, 10:12 AM

LINKS:
Mike Wrecka:
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...stand-who-I-am

Rawn MacDon:
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...Dope-Boy-Fresh

Malachi and Sharp Nine:
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...chi-S9-Collab)

Hush · 02-16-2013, 10:36 AM

even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop;
until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop.

dopest line in the peice in my opinion

dug how you kept it tied together with the clothing theme

good shit.

namix · 02-16-2013, 09:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush

even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop;
until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop.

dopest line in the peice in my opinion

dug how you kept it tied together with the clothing theme

good shit.

'preciate it hush -- good looks brotha

02-05-2013, 04:10 AM	#1
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,260 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246652	"The Emperor's New Gear." Dedicated to the “skill-to-shit talk” ratio gettin all kinds of fucked up. "The Emperor’s New Gear" the emperor’s rockin new gear! but what he rocks is not clear. and after some reflection, the queer should of gotten a mirror wonderin who? THIS DROP IS FOR YOU! come get handled like my business. some put stock in you; but you couldn’t keep my interest. wanna hold our attention?! ya too shitty dude, sorry… at best we'll be dye vested like a hippy groom party. is this a flex about his clothes? is it a diss about his art? either way, it isn’t very hard to see me shittin on his garb. i be spittin out them bars…boy, they fly just like my venom; he could battle me in skinny jeans, i’d still be tighter denim. fuck the black shoes, black socks, & black pants the cat got; see him beat to the ground… ….and leave a REAL profound impression in the blacktop! even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop; until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop. got some bad clocks, he's ticked but not movin; i detect weakness; so i'll rip his fuckin throat apart and sell his girl some neckpieces! then wear his heart on MY sleeve; people, see we had love! nothing has ever came between us except really bad blood! wheelin in mud, when he’s found flat; its exceeding bad luck; ….who said changing attire was easy after bein jacked up? help arrived, but the tow-truck man just stopped to diss him cuz he cant pull off the lugz.. or yoga pants he rocks wit’em don’t get me started on his taste, no topic deader than that if I liked the distressed look…….. I’d rock his head as a hat. but first i’ll make him face his fears; wit one look in the glass once he soils his pants, im going to plant my foot in his ass style-wise, cant iron out the problems, wrinkled too vicious; so i'll put his blouse thru the wringer with this bitch still in it! his impact aint lastin long, kids act like his rap’s the bomb but that formalwear off quick as a drunk chick after prom I can pull quotables out my ass.... he got nothing this fancy he'd have to pull his only one-liner out the front of his panties caught his name 'n let it go; what’s my reason to be skeptical? if memory serves, I’ll remind him that his pieces are forgettable i might blog about his spectacles, use my site to cite the truth, make my tightest Loophole ever, describin how I tied his noose! he coulda used my tutelage; he really needed supervision; but didn’t need the cross-training to receive this crucifixion! i discovered a cover-up, revealed it; now the mystery’s dead; find the legend buried deep within one of our conspiracy threads.

02-05-2013, 02:27 PM	#4
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	HAHAH this was dumb hard, who was you going at tho? lololol sheesh! fuck the black shoes, black socks, & black pants the cat got; see him beat to the ground… ….and leave a REAL profound impression in the blacktop! even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop; until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop. got some bad clocks, he's ticked but not movin; i detect weakness; so i'll rip his fuckin throat apart and sell his girl some neckpieces! __________________ get high. write rhymes.

02-05-2013, 11:56 PM	#6
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	>open topic >see stock/interest wordplay >leave __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

02-05-2013, 11:35 AM	#2
randum Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 21 Rep Power: 35	too ill, I'll feed this later today. props

02-05-2013, 11:57 AM	#3
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,724 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595810	Crazy unique piece, wordplay and symbolism were off the chain. The rhyme scheme was pretty chill which is normally something that I'd criticize, but the content you packed within each lines did more then make up for it. Really enjoyed this

02-06-2013, 02:07 AM	#7
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 502 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737825	Good focus keeping up the different types of clothing themed wordplay. You could do a series of these - wordplay only on different topics/themes.

02-06-2013, 03:16 AM	#8
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	This was pretty dope Flow was fluid, and u schemed it dope.. Content wise this was a nice showing in various areas; nice display of wordplay and punches corresponding with ur theme. If I had to say something negative it would be that some references seemed a little out of place..like I felt that they changed the tone halfway through...might b just me, and very minor...non the less. Enjoyable man.

02-07-2013, 11:28 AM	#9
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,260 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246652	good lookin fellas, thanks for the feedback. I'll swoop through the OM and return the favor today or tomorrow for those of you who've dropped.

02-16-2013, 10:12 AM	#10
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,260 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246652	LINKS: Mike Wrecka: http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...stand-who-I-am Rawn MacDon: http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...Dope-Boy-Fresh Malachi and Sharp Nine: http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...chi-S9-Collab)

02-16-2013, 10:36 AM	#11
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	even as a vegetable, he’ll be pushed around like a cash crop; until im charged with extended battery like a fucking laptop. dopest line in the peice in my opinion dug how you kept it tied together with the clothing theme good shit.