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07-03-2015, 05:45 PM
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NJ Devil
Join Date: Jan 2013
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"Killing niggas from the jump = suicide squad" w/ Greed & Cred
stay safe on the 4th, u already know
Greed Cue the eerie music, spooky, fear is boosted as the tunes to your own funeral become clear and lucid, Here is where the truth is, so fuck u if you not feeling me My response ability's my responsibility Im high rapping. god in here with me and ive lost all civility Though im Lost in the fog im still looking hard for the wishing tree Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine. Unfortunately the Porsche was wrecked while I was getting millennium falcon cleaned, Fanatic as a teen and a bandit for the cream, el chapo with the hat low I'm the captain of the team Vic my niggas bubble, in the kitchen... stove workin them quantam physics I'd get locked if I got specific but I promise my digits wasn't effected by that lotto ticket king of the back an forth, and thats cuz when I'm involved no cash is lost yea I was at my mommas house nigga..it runs in the fam.. I was droppin a package off niggas heard I'm a uber-driver.. cover story boy.. block still moving I'm the supervisor ruthless survivor. cotton mouth saliva, cotton candy kush I can't get higher dominican pops so I'm plugged up dont need suppliers. couple screws loose. I don't need pliers. Puerto rican Micheal Myers eyes hide the fire. all the threads I buy are flyer. Brugal in my double cup double down to double up, SS gang if they dont fuck wit us we fuck it up Cred Im a Chiraq drilla, got my nigga doin time for murder. Facts I kill 16's, he killed & got 16.. Bitch we still BOTH doin murder raps Servin crack, flow butter, 100 shot drum come wit extra .. For a bitch like u jus startin to Flex, this chrome .38 gon Stretch ya Apply pressure.. I'm in beast mode, Steven Siegel flick- I'm the sequel We not equal, put a round in the middle of dis square.. dats a peep hole I'm all over my city map, fuk & disrespect ya girl.. I'm a gritty cat Cuz I'll P on da bitch head ..but I ain't buy her no Phillies hat Gimmie dat, screamin Suicide dats the team Beat the fuk outta u like I kno MMA.. & leave ur fukin Pride in the ring
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07-04-2015, 03:34 AM
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Location: Louisville, KY
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07-04-2015, 04:50 AM
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Shrewd as evearthed
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: Wolverhampton, England
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Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine.
that was dope to me from Greed Hush had the lotto and dropping a package off shit that was straight fire Cred closed it out illy too with these four Apply pressure.. I'm in beast mode, Steven Siegel flick- I'm the sequel We not equal, put a round in the middle of dis square.. dats a peep hole I'm all over my city map, fuk & disrespect ya girl.. I'm a gritty cat Cuz I'll P on da bitch head ..but I ain't buy her no Phillies hat dope shit bruhs
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07-09-2015, 11:09 AM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,023
Battle Record: 35-45
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My response ability's my responsibility
Im high rapping. god in here with me and ive lost all civility Though im Lost in the fog im still looking hard for the wishing tree Picture me trying to Force perfection, Emperor palpatine. ^^^ this was my favorite section off of your verse Greed, the flow was smooth the line's came together with some slick precision, that opener made me think ehh... but I read it again and it's pretty dope, the ending was alright, but the verse flowed smoothly my niggas bubble, in the kitchen... stove workin them quantam physics I'd get locked if I got specific but I promise my digits wasn't effected by that lotto ticket king of the back an forth, and thats cuz when I'm involved no cash is lost yea I was at my mommas house nigga..it runs in the fam.. I was droppin a package off ^^^ that's pretty clean right there, I just enjoy the way you bounce around with the flow the rest was on point too, I feel like you had the strongest verse here that ending was pretty smooth as well, nice work man... Im a Chiraq drilla, got my nigga doin time for murder. Facts I kill 16's, he killed & got 16.. Bitch we still BOTH doin murder raps We not equal, put a round in the middle of dis square.. dats a peep hole I'm all over my city map, fuk & disrespect ya girl.. I'm a gritty cat Cuz I'll P on da bitch head ..but I ain't buy her no Phillies hat ^^^^ Your verse was as smooth as Hush's, but had it's hit & misses as well my only issue was the 'not equal line' but I like the rhymes wrapped around it it sounds good when you first read it because you don't catch it at first but I never seen a square door aside from a doggy door, which I will give you dope verse regardless This was a dope collab, I really enjoy reading collabs because the styles need to mesh this is more of a crew drop, so I understand you are all showcasing your skills and all of you have your own dope way of attacking a verse & blending rhymes together it's enjoyable to read. nice work fella's keep up the suicidal work
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