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Old 02-24-2019, 08:14 PM   #1
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(After all this time, I need this.)

What good is a copper band without any arms?
What good is a problem-task without any solves?
Perhaps the problem asked has yawed n evolved.
If it be some’s choice, then wonder the halls.
But touch not with annoyance and do my profits no harm.

(In the beginning they were words.)

A habit turned an addict, a test None Shall Pass.
When your favorite artist’s made the mark the sum’s come last.
To father sons with mostly spirit, the sign of a X.
Disregarded as a lost and un-need chair on the deck.
Oh forsaken vases in which I meant to place blooms .
The moon was the sun and his lunch wasn’t noon.
Arkham inhabitant who’s habitat was Gotham’s best brew.
And on a dark night when the moon is asleep,
He feasts amongst coxcombs in a Room full of heat.

(His famine is post-Mortem?)

Not a chain or lock n key, but still a thirst and desperate need.
A tax to pay to Caesar, but not a tyrant king.
It’s like the stage of cripple jam, the little pretty penny, bring me the light so I may see.


(Give to the crowd what the crowd shalst ask? Give to the crown what the crown shalst ask? Give to the lord what he wants for his wife? Give to yourself what is not a pipe.)
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Old 02-25-2019, 10:24 AM   #2
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I thought this was a pretty cool read. You had nice wording and flow in places. I do enjoy the topic at hand; it was pretty dope. You're a cool writer, and it shows. Nice one, man. Keep writing!
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