Pfft

Exis · 01-16-2014, 06:56 PM

Ayo,

Foundation accomplished
yup, the structure is solid
add on if your anus be wantin' punk
and have it nothin' but polished
built from the toughest of products
with material stable as shit
'cause the make up bitches flakey are facin'
isn't coverin' problems
it's been made to stuff with your noggins
as it's basically sick
oops, majorly kid
I've gone to a great from amazin'
while y'all think it pays to be slick?
I see more sense when you suckers are honest
'stead of tryna play with me bitch
they say nada is promised except taxes and death
and you'll accept an axe to your head
if you fuck with the dollars that Ex has managed to get
thru gallons of sweat lost with not a crumb of it borrowed
and since it hasn't happened as yet
like dementia
I tend to forget,
that this may come with tomorrow after rememberin' jets
while yesterday
let's address
is just a path that you've left
in the past here my friend
hopin' it's sumthin' not followed rather than tracked on again
to reattach with the love you've for sorrow
like your attracted, content
with this peddlin' backwards and so forth 'til the ride tragically ends.

Wise Wiggles · 01-16-2014, 07:32 PM

"and since it hasn't happened as yet
like dementia
I tend to forget,
that this may come with tomorrow after rememberin' jets
while yesterday
let's address
is just a path that you've left
in the past here my friend
hopin' it's sumthin' not followed rather than tracked on again
to reattach with the love you've for sorrow
like your attracted, content
with this peddlin' backwards and so forth 'til the ride tragically ends."

Thought that was some deep shit right there. Cool little flow. Pce.

Exis · 01-21-2014, 01:02 AM

Lol @ one reply...thanks though.

e11even · 01-21-2014, 03:11 AM

That shit was beyond consistent. I like how that flow went thru a cycle before it started again. Pretty dope. Keep it up Ex.

CopyPat · 01-21-2014, 03:19 AM

interesting. definitely a bit of a change for u content wise, so that was good to see. still keepin ur method man dueling schemes style, haha shits hard to do so always props on that. it was like u kindof wanted to be a bit more serious but didn't commit to it fully. like dipping ur foot in the pool a little. next time dive right in fool, lets see what u got!!

glad ur back, been around lately

Exis · 01-21-2014, 06:36 AM

Nah your right...content wasn't the focus here but runnin' a duel scheme and keepin' the flow straight was, just excercisin' for my own benefit I guess...I noticed how the subject matter changed midway as I was writin' it but thought fuck it 'cause I liked the scheme & flow of it lol...I get what your sayin' man, thanks for the feed as always.

Concrete · 01-21-2014, 09:47 AM

Interesting read overall, some unpredictable schemes that works.
Get an impression that you frankly just lavish in different reflections.
I can dig that format as long as it doesn't come off as contrived or inhibited.
Which in your case it didn't.

Exis · 01-25-2014, 03:42 AM

Just bumpin' this one time.

Eŋg · 01-25-2014, 04:17 PM

basically dope. minus that anus line. i like your style, which is arrogant and aggressive but also a bit hopeless. cool schemes -- easy reader's flow. change your name though. nah not really i don't even like this name and it's not my main one. taxes and death/axe to the head -- whew. write more shit like that. don't be corny. ok thanks.

01-16-2014, 06:56 PM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Pfft Ayo, Foundation accomplished yup, the structure is solid add on if your anus be wantin' punk and have it nothin' but polished built from the toughest of products with material stable as shit 'cause the make up bitches flakey are facin' isn't coverin' problems it's been made to stuff with your noggins as it's basically sick oops, majorly kid I've gone to a great from amazin' while y'all think it pays to be slick? I see more sense when you suckers are honest 'stead of tryna play with me bitch they say nada is promised except taxes and death and you'll accept an axe to your head if you fuck with the dollars that Ex has managed to get thru gallons of sweat lost with not a crumb of it borrowed and since it hasn't happened as yet like dementia I tend to forget, that this may come with tomorrow after rememberin' jets while yesterday let's address is just a path that you've left in the past here my friend hopin' it's sumthin' not followed rather than tracked on again to reattach with the love you've for sorrow like your attracted, content with this peddlin' backwards and so forth 'til the ride tragically ends.

01-16-2014, 07:32 PM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	"and since it hasn't happened as yet like dementia I tend to forget, that this may come with tomorrow after rememberin' jets while yesterday let's address is just a path that you've left in the past here my friend hopin' it's sumthin' not followed rather than tracked on again to reattach with the love you've for sorrow like your attracted, content with this peddlin' backwards and so forth 'til the ride tragically ends." Thought that was some deep shit right there. Cool little flow. Pce. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

01-21-2014, 03:11 AM	#4
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	That shit was beyond consistent. I like how that flow went thru a cycle before it started again. Pretty dope. Keep it up Ex. __________________ Ahem.

01-21-2014, 03:19 AM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	interesting. definitely a bit of a change for u content wise, so that was good to see. still keepin ur method man dueling schemes style, haha shits hard to do so always props on that. it was like u kindof wanted to be a bit more serious but didn't commit to it fully. like dipping ur foot in the pool a little. next time dive right in fool, lets see what u got!! glad ur back, been around lately __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

01-21-2014, 01:02 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Lol @ one reply...thanks though.

01-21-2014, 06:36 AM	#6
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Nah your right...content wasn't the focus here but runnin' a duel scheme and keepin' the flow straight was, just excercisin' for my own benefit I guess...I noticed how the subject matter changed midway as I was writin' it but thought fuck it 'cause I liked the scheme & flow of it lol...I get what your sayin' man, thanks for the feed as always.

01-21-2014, 09:47 AM	#7
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158974	Interesting read overall, some unpredictable schemes that works. Get an impression that you frankly just lavish in different reflections. I can dig that format as long as it doesn't come off as contrived or inhibited. Which in your case it didn't.

01-25-2014, 03:42 AM	#8
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Just bumpin' this one time.

01-25-2014, 04:17 PM	#9
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,146 Rep Power: 0	basically dope. minus that anus line. i like your style, which is arrogant and aggressive but also a bit hopeless. cool schemes -- easy reader's flow. change your name though. nah not really i don't even like this name and it's not my main one. taxes and death/axe to the head -- whew. write more shit like that. don't be corny. ok thanks.