01-28-2014, 05:26 PM | #1 |
6ft of Seperation
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War.
The Art of War A carnivores repertoire The battle cry, a yearn for more Rattled lives, families torn.. ..But I love it so much Bloodlust makes me cold to touch Hold no trust as I clutch a grudge My sword won't budge. A infinite instrument. Intricate penmanship shows ignorant diligence Belligerent misfit with a knack for killing shit Imminent vigilant.. Creep in the night shade My knife slittin your throat till your light fades Last seconds as he searching for the right aide No savior not your friendly "hi neighbor!" There's a certain taste to killin & i like the flavor Quick little something. Wanting to expand but I seem to have hit a wall.
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01-29-2014, 06:49 AM | #2 |
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First 3 bars are fresh, "clutch a grudge" sounds a bit forced.
This following set was quite aight imo A infinite instrument. Intricate penmanship shows ignorant diligence Belligerent misfit with a knack for killing shit Imminent vigilant.. Creep in the night shade My knife slittin your throat till your light fades Overall a bit short but nice lil read. |
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