03-10-2013, 01:32 AM | #1 |
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Hold the pillow.
this is for you lone rangers, that hate allegiance
every django has his day- damn near taste the freedom seen it all before, just couldn't frame the sequence seen the sun set, just couldn't chase the pheonix walk in the clouds, a grape for squeezing it's cancer cartons, kush & beer rafter carvings- brooks was here fresh scars be scaring the women something's gotta work cuz therapy didn't a bear with these writtens of terrible visions you think God really cares if we sinning ? melt with me- hold the pillow, I'm Jeremy piven hell? I see your raise, now deal the turn i got no poker face.. no real concern well tailored self immolation- I don't feel the burn just gather up the ashes and seal the urn throw me in a gust, cliffside, right near a sea watch me fly away & disappear like bees just an empty tin man, no gears to squeak most snakes end up sleeping w/the eels or worms the hood's Lector. Eat your cheek for good measure oh look, pepper! now the flesh'll cook better rainy days ain't so bad, you need wet to grow you lennon's need to let it be & let it go no one's perfect- we all human from head to toe time stops, toasting w/my pops like depp in blow |
03-10-2013, 01:48 AM | #2 | |
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made it a bit awkward to read, but other than this bit, it read perfectly fine. good post. |
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03-10-2013, 03:06 AM | #3 |
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Hahaha. Lively rhyme - almost revived the forum single handidly
it's cancer cartons, kush & beer rafter carvings- brooks was here don't go awol join AOWL -frank was here-
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03-11-2013, 02:15 PM | #4 |
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rainy days ain't so bad, you need wet to grow
you lennon's need to let it be & let it go no one's perfect- we all human from head to toe time stops, toasting w/my pops like depp in blow Word. Go feed someone asshole.
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03-11-2013, 05:18 PM | #5 |
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this was dope. it actually made me delay posting my own shit.
damn this flowed so fluid |
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