03-07-2013, 10:54 PM | #1 |
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fake collab feat my swag
my tempo the difficult version, lyrical sicko, the wording a bit dope
....serving this merger on a digital flip phone, chilling in my zip code putting zippo's to verses, the schizo, i get nervous before i flick tho ...blowing herb in the suburban, purp hits, swerving on a slick road sharp as swords curves wit the heart of george gervin on a pick-roll ...i'll stay murdering skits bro, on purpose, for burgers with big cokes theres more torment, war torrents, bursting when each quote flourish ...burning sheets til my urn exceeds, call a morgue florist, decor person the letter form supporter, never bored worker, veteran poem sorcerer ....next jetson flexing pens, my threads threaten the boldest enforcers its text wit a twist, im using the hands of dead contortionist performers ...omen endorser turned coding explorer, on a trek til my expedition end your now alone with a stoner, theres no better connection my nexus get ...im cold an getting warmer from connecticut to texas, never left the crib my objective is progressive elegance, the evidence?, excellent messages ...my rep is devilish from repping hell and shit, whats respectable relevance? hannibal lecturing from an animals perspective, a lesson in parrot intelligence ...owl take care of the rest of the damage bro, if you can bear the references prepare to dead this sprint, im hares from checker print, spared my 2nd wind ...in that blair witch set, wreckless, wearing a werewolf head on a necklace pin stepping in the direction of the best there is, in a fresh pair of weathered timbs ...pointed me to the exit of heaven quick!, i've been destined for hell ever since...
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03-08-2013, 01:18 AM | #2 |
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Nice drop man. Was digging the flow, stayed consistent throughout. A couple standout lines. I really enjoyed the animal wordplays/extended metaphor towards the end. The 'burning sheets till my urn exceeds' line was fresh too. Not much to critique here, solid drop!
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03-08-2013, 04:33 PM | #3 |
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theres more torment, war torrents, bursting when each quote flourish
...burning sheets til my urn exceeds, call a morgue florist, decor person the letter form supporter, never bored worker, veteran poem sorcerer ....next jetson flexing pens, my threads threaten the boldest enforcers its text wit a twist, im using the hands of dead contortionist performers ^^Fuckin ill. Nice drop once again Camp. This piece I think has to be the best I've seen from you man. Sick flow dispersed throughout this piece. Just ill man forreal. |
03-09-2013, 04:25 PM | #4 |
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Holy shit Camp Bell.
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03-09-2013, 05:29 PM | #5 |
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This is impressive. I would give more feed but I hate you.
lol for real though, you wrote the shit out of this, I'll try and get back for more in depth feed, props though man.
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03-09-2013, 06:56 PM | #6 |
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you asshole lol, great flex. This was some crazy internal rhyme scheme shit. loved it
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03-09-2013, 07:43 PM | #7 |
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....next jetson flexing pens, my threads threaten the boldest enforcers
its text wit a twist, im using the hands of dead contortionist performers nice! structure was perfect IMO ... I can tell you're from the same forums as Dull hahah
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03-14-2013, 11:51 PM | #8 |
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just bumping for more exposure
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03-16-2013, 12:51 PM | #9 |
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Thanks for the feed partna here to return the favor.
Well, the objective here was rhyming. And you did a damn impressive job there, duke. Not much i can say that others havent already said so i'll just quote my fav. part "...my rep is devilish from repping hell and shit, whats respectable relevance? hannibal lecturing from an animals perspective, a lesson in parrot intelligence" Dope |
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