10-02-2019, 10:34 PM | #1 |
Junior Member
Join Date: Jul 2019
Posts: 2
Rep Power: 0 |
Lost
You’re like glass under pressure cracking till it shatters, somewhat incomplete, yet somehow outlasting,
You’re fragile and missing, tested and persisting, I can't take a breath or resist reminiscing, And more often than not you’ve slipped up at the top of the mountain you’ve propped up with thoughts soaked with sin, Now I’m choking on gin, no more tonic to spin this delusional mind ripping me limb from limb, So I can't help but think that you’re broken and sinking cause the ship of your life has more holes than I'm fixing, I see that your soul has grown cold from subsisting, the hope’s gone from your eyes, all that’s left is persisting. |
10-02-2019, 10:37 PM | #2 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2019
Posts: 117
Rep Power: 0 |
This was deep my nigga
|
10-02-2019, 11:48 PM | #3 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 1,123
Battle Record: 1-1
Champed - Guerrilla writing league
Rep Power: 19240092 |
I’m glad I’m not the only one with a noisy mind. Welcome, HalfTab
|
10-03-2019, 02:53 AM | #4 |
............
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 3,938
Battle Record: 3-3
Rep Power: 0 |
Nice man, emotion wise it's tight...
|
Thread Tools | |
Display Modes | |
|
|