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Old 07-12-2015, 02:53 PM   #1
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"What Does It Equate To?"






The sky didn't load today. I stared straight at the screen
as binary code fell where the rain should of been.
It simulated a series of sums in substantial
chains of repeating numbers and fractals.
Hundreds of calculations began their descent
as I studied their patterns to exact what they meant.
The mathematical medley spread further afield
until every last geometric of Second World was revealed!
I searched my surreal surrounding amazed to discover
that this perfect ideal had been painted by numbers!
Every shape had a structural plan at it's basis
that made up the sum of a mathematical matrix.
These enigmatic equations were behind all that I saw
- the statutory basics of what had caused them to form.
This ordered conformity proved hard to resist
as I was sure there was more to it, so I started to think!
How did every part of this simulation work to a mandate
yet remain so largely in-sync with it's virtual landscape?
Second World was a man-made augmented reality
that was perfectly translated from a numerical tapestry.
Was there a connection I hadn't seen that was hidden as well?
I sensed that there had to be, so I continued to delve!
These algorithms all held predefined symmetries
from the patterned ridges on shells to the changing tides of the sea.
Even the spiralling sequence pine cones happened to have
- it was like they'd all speak the universal language of math!
These fractal-like patterns were a product of automation
manufactured en masse so they were functioning verbatim.
I studied the equations and how they related to each other
both the number of the nature, and the nature of the numbers.
Fascinated to uncover the building blocks of this digital zone
- was there a way I could adjust it, to the one we physically know?
I clicked to look closer, compare and contrast,
thinking this over as my avatar searched everywhere on the map.
It became fairly apparent in the use of this fresh search
that both worlds shared an elaborate numeral network!
I continued it a step further, looking at the characteristics
in the movement and tenure of our planetary systems.
They all have an elliptical structure they have to keep
it's a mathematical synergy that's governed by gravity.
The circumference they travel being exactly the same
is yet another example seen of these factors at play.
The galaxy's made up of constants and certainties
with math at the base of the logical world we see!
Once that anomaly first appeared for me to establish the fact
I knew the one universally spoken language was math!
Things didn't happen by chance, there was a method pertained
and the more I carried on asking, the more questions I raised.
Had the universe "invented" this matrix the day it first formed
or had we developed it later, to explain what we saw?
Did we make up the formula as a tool to depict with
or was this nature performing as it would do since existence?
The true coefficient is we still haven't answered its secret
but i'm damn sure it inhibits a mathematical sequence...
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Old 07-15-2015, 10:35 AM   #2
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lmao may all your lives be a little sadder for not helping me out here, yo :(
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Old 07-15-2015, 10:36 AM   #3
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I got this in a few.
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Old 07-23-2015, 04:33 PM   #5
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Old 07-23-2015, 06:00 PM   #6
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lmao dearnoone,

why you ducking the disc board since your shit got exposed though?

you look like skeletor with lip balm my crigger

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I posted in disc?

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Old 07-23-2015, 11:09 PM   #8
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This is a verse I lost to, and it is a verse I can say I am happy to have lost to. It is crafted in such a way that it depicts the world around the narrator, in a fashion that represents the pixels of his own vision. It reminds me of the movie, Pi, but with a different direction. One of my favorite movies, by the way. This movie depicts someone with an obsessive mind for finding the patterns of the universe, which he is convinced can be correlated through mathematics because even chaos eventually dwindles into order and that order can then be scrutinized and examined. Thus, giving the potentiality of being able to define it and understand it.

But, this verse also had a sense of the speaker being in awe, without the desperation that comes with the mind of a mathematician, at times, or so I've heard. I mean men of science are usually detached and non-conformists to the ways of the world. There's a difference between mathematicians and number theorists.
Now in this world, there exists only numbers, at least in the perception of the narrator. Numbers are his heart, in fact, this narrator would probably try to find an existential pattern to the beats of his own heart to some kind of deeper meaning interlinking the world and him together.

Like I said, it was very well done. Every word was chosen with a purpose, although one criticism I will say is that sometimes some lines felt redundant, the same meaning as other lines, but just different words, or in this case patterns. Nevertheless, a fine showing.

Thanks for the read.

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