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Old 02-06-2019, 08:46 AM   #1
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Ayo...

I'm an emcee who's tripped in his head,
Tailored flows have me rippin' your threads
Spittin' in red
You'll get burned sicker than VD,
You tried to piss & you bled
I emit vital fires,
That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials
Leave your face shattered in piles,
Slice & leave your matter in tiles
Grip your bladder & smile,
It's a sadistic message that you get from my smith & wesson
Where every inch'll get tested,
So let me strip the flesh off you chest
& slap this bitch in question all amidst the confusion & ruin,
I'm totally schoolin' these fools & suspendin' the truants
A bomb tickin' & movin' 'til I stick your lungs in my freezer
Right next to the coolant,
I erected this status of rap
You'll get ejected from life by a gat
That's all hazardous
Crap will be sadder than,
When Jesus of Nazareth
Got slapped up & battered bitch,
I'll have your frame completely fuckin' nailed here kid.
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Old 02-06-2019, 09:34 AM   #2
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My end game was
"Grip your bladder and smile"

Word?
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Old 02-07-2019, 05:52 AM   #3
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Dawg joke?...
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Old 02-07-2019, 11:36 PM   #4
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For someone who always harps on bars over bullshit and whatever else you talk about you're really dumb. This is, like, a Cam'Ron verse without the charisma or talent. I look forward to your next Open Mic.
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Old 02-09-2019, 07:47 AM   #5
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Please lol...

I emit vital fires,
That shower in spirals higher than powder in vials
Leave your face shattered in piles,
Slice & leave your matter in tiles

That destroys anythin' you've ever written...& this was my last verse here, hence the title dumb fuck.
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Old 02-10-2019, 03:42 PM   #6
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None of that makes any sense.

How high does powder in vials shower, exactly?

How do you slice matter into tiles?

Idk. You probably do. That shit is better than I writing words.
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Why is the fire vital?
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I'll tell you what doesn't make sense, bitch...Your a fat long haired European hermit that thinks he's the greatest lyricist to grace a forum...You sit behind a screen givin' critique to others that are better than you!? Idiot, go fuck another glow stick you dense untalented maggot...
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