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Old 03-11-2013, 02:34 PM   #1
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Old 03-11-2013, 03:24 PM   #2
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Pretty lively with the content, I thought this was nice. Different types of multi patterns than I'm used to seeing from you - almost traditional.

Catching wift of, my meditation techniques is a melodic transplant, that sends you in a state of sedated ex-tremes
Wake up with me solving equations to X(3) while the hypnotic trance lulls you in an emblazoned dead-sleep
^my fav. part.

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Old 03-11-2013, 06:42 PM   #3
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Haven't he'd sex in about, since sex had me"

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Old 03-11-2013, 07:19 PM   #4
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Such a napalmy scenery, so just stay calm and, breathe with me

:-)

Stay still. An inch? Your irises. Dilated from the tilt the griddle iron shifts
The thrill. The pill, the minuses. You can’t propel, fulfill this dynasty
It’s illness. the type of shit, you couldn’t understand in an instance of deciphering

ur pretty smart, lol

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No, but that line was cool.


I liked the rest too but I like the lines I quoted more because I quoted them.

Really snazzy stuff. Good job. You know you're good at this thing so why am I are telling you? Are you really that egotistical? Fuck you.
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Old 03-12-2013, 04:56 AM   #5
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Dope shit from what I read, think I remember you from RF but possibly not. I'm old and get confused about who is who these days. I blame the drugs. Or the monotony most people post. This was fresh though, good to see some of us still around and representing.

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