02-02-2014, 01:11 PM | #1 |
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Chris?..
This is about my brother. And is spoken word.
God has given you life and within you his eyes, yet you cover his face. thinking our mother's to blame for the world throwin' you under it's train, stomach full of truth serum and too inebriated to plead the fifth, how is it you can still bare to be seeing this beneath "it" Chris? you HIDE the truth and LIE to You, always begging to find "This" proof, behind all of your problems, wearing "this" mask failin' to realize it's you, we hear the deception in your voice that's darkened your mind, I can even see the spark in your eyes starting to die, your face is emotionless and looks like you're breathing the ocean in, drowning in thought; choking where no solace is, now the coldest, grim, smolderin' memories are coaxing in this depression, impulsively battling these euphoric struggles, throwing fists of your vengeance, always unfocused and misdirected, wandering aimlessly in hope of affection, you're lost in the boldest aggression and feeling nothing but the coldest of essence, you only live once, so tell me why do you limit yourself, why am i givin' you help, do you really live with your health? Why is this stage of your life a mimic of hell? I've seen you back when you lived in a cell and when you were grippin' the twelve, when i held your life in my hands, fate was ringin' a bell and God was in me to tell, the night you overdosed, thought your life was over bro, almost cried with no control, habit took over my mind and overthrown, scared of the thought where your soul will go, Mom was crying, tiffany's frozen, dad's givin' me notions, but i wasn't givin' you roses.. we are confined by the limits we've chosen, and i hope one day you'll live in the open, so gimme your focus and listen, when the night has come and you think life is done, 'cause you had problems with the girl you tried to love, Just remember man, you a better man, you'll get a second chance, and we all know you'll get a new girl better than you ever had, but if you ever need help from me, just ask and i'll lend a hand, And I'll guide you thru God's stellar plans in this hellish land ... "Truth is like the sun. You can shut it out for a time, but it ain't goin' away.." |
02-02-2014, 02:53 PM | #2 |
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Strong 3rd post
I signed on to let you know that this was dope bro. This was some real shit. I nominate this for HOF Yo be on the look out for the AOWL season 3, around the corner Again, dope piece my man - stay up
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02-02-2014, 03:07 PM | #3 |
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thanks Frank, I'm a veteran topical head on many other sites. I'm prepping for battling soon enough, so i'll definitely keep that in mind.
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02-02-2014, 09:09 PM | #4 |
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I love it! This was dopest piece I read from you.
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you've read more?
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02-03-2014, 11:26 AM | #6 |
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I thought this was dope.
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02-03-2014, 12:36 PM | #7 |
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Horrible bible bashing bullshit
Go join the 7th day Davidians or some shit. |
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lmao thinks is serious, obv trolled, only piece hes has dg |
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